TS: Habits (Part 2/2 Updated Pg 5)

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: shabz50
Loved it Nidhi this piece shows how much ragini loves him and how she remembers all his habits.
And when she could not smell his scent anymore she cried herself to sleep thinking she was forgeting his smell.

Loved it nidhi. Please write one from nachikets side please

Thank you Shabz!! 😳

I'm really glad you liked this one...and yes exactly she was upset that she was forgetting that part of him...that at the time she thought she would never get back.

No more from me for the time being (it was hard to even finish this little bit) but not to worry I will still be around 😃

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neiralove

@neiralove

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Dear Shikha,

Thank you so so much 🤗 😳

So very happy you liked it...yes it is those little things that are more intimate than the big gestures.

No second part to this but I ❤️ you and your comments always 😳

I ❤️ you more 😳

🤗

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Thank you Rachna 😳 🤗

Sorry to keep writing sad stuff, it just sneaks its way in there But now, it will only get better for them.

I hope they will like it, but I am ecstatic that you enjoyed it as well ❤️

Nidhi, as Shabz says, there needs to be an accompanying part. WE need to see how Nachiket coped as well. Please do write 😳

In fact, this one over here set me into an introspective journey😊

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Jia

@NeiRaFreak

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Nidhi this was just WOW

Small and soft story from her POV covering everything a relationship has.. All his memories and habits weaved very beautifully... Loved this and love you for this 😳

Thanks for writing and sharing 😊

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Mansur Khan

@MansurKhan56

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Nidhi this is sweet stuff👏

I am toh just speechless😳. Totally beautiful and perfect👏

Simply fantastic. Superb explanation of memories.

It was all nice to read Ragini's POV anytime😳

Thanks for writing and can we have N POV too😛

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loveleen3

@loveleen3

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

I read it yesterday and ever since then I've been trying to come up with words that would do justice to appreciate this write-up.

I had felt something when I read it. I didn't know what at that time. Happens a lot of time with me. I have figured it out a bit now. Although I am not sure if it makes sense.

This write-up wasn't written in the first person, but it was personal. Extremely personal. Personal to the point that I felt I was invading someone's privacy. Like I had read someone's personal journal which I wasn't supposed to. This has been going on in my mind since yesterday. I think the individual who said we shouldn't read other person's journal because that is invading someone's privacy was lying. I am pretty sure he had read someone's personal diary. And when he had read it, it had scared the shit out of him. Being aware of the pain the other person is in, is a scary thing.

When I read this line- The night she could no longer bring his scent to mind,

This sentence terrified me. I imagined her pain and I wanted to unread this whole thing. I can not think of a better compliment for you.

Terrific writing, Nidhi! 👏

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Ragini Joshi

@RaginiJoshi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

WOW piece!

Habits couldn't be described more beautifully! Each and every habit.. Put me into a trance! They are so beautiful! My heart warmed! And the last part.. His eyes still spoke to hers..and in his heart, she still heard her name.. Ethereal!

You made me realize once again why I love them ❤️

Thanks a lot! Perfect birthday gift❤️

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Thank you dear Narges 😳

I think they say that smell makes one of our strongest memories (or maybe I made that up 😆)

I am thrilled that you liked it...however that hug is not going to make up for you ignoring me otherwise

😛

No no, I would like to believe you didn't made that up matlab yes smell makes one of our strongest memories 😉😳

Haww... how can I make it up to you then? Why are you being so difficult 😕😛

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roneeta

@ronitfan

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

This is the most beautiful habit.. Nidhi..

Thank you so much for this amazingly sensitive and vivid description of what love is - these small things that define us and become our rituals when we change that something in us to make space for the 'one' - *SIGH*

This was heavenly gorgeous and such a beautiful birthday gift..

Your writing is tremendous, dear.

Thank you so much!!

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: NeiRaFreak
Nidhi this was just WOW

Small and soft story from her POV covering everything a relationship has.. All his memories and habits weaved very beautifully... Loved this and love you for this 😳

Thanks for writing and sharing 😊

Jia, thank you sooo much for your very kind words 😳😳

I'm so happy you liked this and hope it brought a smile to your face 😃...thank YOU for reading!