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Posted: 10 years ago
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No I am ok. Its only that some people were asking me to post. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I did comment 😈
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Posted: 10 years ago
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yeah I saw. Thanks

Thank you all
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Posted: 10 years ago
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O my Sweet Lord this girl is equipped with Midas Touch I swear 😲 Yes talking about you Rachna 😳 every word you use is magical and Pure GOLD ❤️
and this piece ☺️ NSFW but what about this place I am reading from 😆

N and R on IF are simply gorgeous and that cookies and craving touch 😉 😳

❤️ ❤️ ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: NeiRaFreak

O my Sweet Lord this girl is equipped with Midas Touch I swear 😲 Yes talking about you Rachna 😳 every word you use is magical and Pure GOLD ❤️

and this piece ☺️ NSFW but what about this place I am reading from 😆

N and R on IF are simply gorgeous and that cookies and craving touch 😉 😳

❤️ ❤️ ❤️


For you, its NSFH 😆

Don't worry, I tond it down and took off the major part. Now, its kiddy safe 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Where can someone find the non kiddy safe version?? 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So first I was ☺️ at:
With a feather light touch of lips, he savored and teased the tender skin behind her ear. She arched into his kiss, passion beading on her lip, his name escaping as a moan from just underneath. The delicate white arc of her throat opened to him, a sacrament. He let his tongue scrape across her sensitive flesh, and then proceeded to trace the rim of her ear.
Then I was ☺️☺️ at:
Ragini blindly sought the hand cupping her cheek. Desperate to arouse in him the same exquisite sensations he excited in her, she traced his jaw tenderly, her fingers trailing fire.

And then I was 🤢 at:

In the strange, wondrous geometry of passion and love, pleasure received became submissive to pleasure given, the desire of each to bring the other to rapture came to dominate individual need.

AND if that wasn't enough:

Desire began to roll off him like waves from the sea. She brought her arms up to embrace his broad shoulders as she brought her lips to the curve of his neck.

THAT is Ragini Khanna 😳

What beauty in your words...why the changes?
Also they are going to need a truck full of cookies to make up for lost time 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Also what happened to her nails on his back...I have evidence you know
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Rachna Di!
I was going to re-read this for inspiration... 😔
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Rachna, we all commented! But you need to realise that its difficult to come out of the world that your words create! And double that difficulty level when you write this class hot stuff! I'm still not out of it. <3
We all could have written beautiful, hawt, brilliant, fantastic and these words would not have justice to the beauty you have written.
On this forum, we all write about N and R getting physical, sometimes they are fighting, sometimes flirting, most of the time its raw desire. Reading your piece was like, Nachiket and Ragini saying, I'll die if i don't get you right now. The intensity was so powerful, I wondered how you could pen it down even. Its your words, Rachna. Since I'm on mobile, I can't copy the words, but i agree with Shikha's comment above. You write magical stuff. And this was no different. Please stop editing it now and give us the non-kiddo version. :D Have to go now! Will come back! You're beautiful! Thank you for writing this. :D

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