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neiralove

@neiralove

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Rachna Di! ❤️

I'm sorry, I'm terribly late! 😔

Like Sukhi Di, I'm simply at a loss for words. I seriously don't know where or how to start. Your writing always makes me feel this pure bliss...

There's a graceful maturity in your writing combined with a deep and passionate understanding of the most complex of desires. And that's what makes it such a guilty pleasure to read... 😳

Her passion escalated as he drew up, hovering for one delirious moment above her lips and then floating, drifting, seeking her, seeking eternity.

How do you even manage to write like this...?! I'm totally fida, right here

Ragini's teeth grazed his full lip, nipped and tugged at him, then devoured him in a ferocious kiss.

Oh god! ☺️

It was a blitzkrieg of emotions, passion and undying love that united them as their hearts, souls and bodies became one - their hearts pounding ferociously within their cages, and a fine sheen of sweat covering them.

The perfect description of their entire beings just melting together as they finally bring each other to the peak of happiness 😳

"Mrs Khanna", he whispered into her ears lovingly "I am still not done ... with you."

And if Nachiket isn't done with her, how can you be done writing?! Not fair, Di!

And, of course, the cookies! 😆 The sweet little ending to this delicious story! 😉

I'm so in love with this piece--thank you so much for writing and for letting it stay up. 😳 You are pure magic. 🤗

Please don't say this is the last one.

Edited by neiralove - 10 years ago

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: neiralove
That was captivating...
Excuse me while I go lose myself in that magnificence again... ☺️

Thanks Shikha. Now going to read your updated comments.

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: metoyou
"Mrs Khanna", he whispered into her ears lovingly "I am still not done ... with you."
If this does not make any of us swoon then I swear we are not normal...

Sweet heaven of pleasure! ☺️

Thanks Narges for taking out the time to read and comment 😃

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: shabz50
OMG going to throw some iced water on myself will be back with comments and going to read it again

Ha ha Shabz 😃, thank you.

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Vicky7
Cookies,I so love them☺️
Can't give coherent comment for am feeling rhapsodic nirvana☺️

Thanks Vicky 😆 Hope you are out of your rhapsodic nirvana now

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Zohalhussein
Omg Omg Omg maza ayah you are writing very nice 👍🏼👏

Thanks Zohal 😆

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roneeta

@ronitfan

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: poetic

Thanks a lot Sukhi 🤗

And that gif has no equals, one of my most favourite films.

I was very tentative about writing this and posting this. Wrote, posted, edited, took off, re posted - i did so much nakhra kya bolu. 😆

But I am glad that you all liked it. Maybe this is the last one for some time.

🤗 back to you!

Really cannot understand why you would be tentative to post about this beauty.. it was NR magic through and through!

😳

Fingers crossed we get something so amazing in the 16 episodes to come that it eggs everyone to write .. I am sure this is not your last for a long time!

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Rachna,

I don't even have words to express what this did to me ☺️

But I know you'd probably prefer if I did so I will try my best...

First, the sheer beauty of your language alone - it weaves such a spell that for a few minutes I'm dreaming and watching your words play out in front of me, and each hits me right here ❤️

The desperation, the passion, the love - all were so exquisitely described...

I would end up posting the whole thing (much like my last comment) but as an example THIS:

Her passion escalated as he drew up, hovering for one delirious moment above her lips and then floating, drifting, seeking her, seeking eternity. Behind closed eyes, she saw herself reaching out to him, urging him to complete her.

Just no words, no emojis for that, just emotion.

So glad you ended up posting this in its entirety...it was hot, for sure, but also so powerful and did complete justice to these characters we all feel for.

And I already mentioned how much I liked the cookies 😳

Thank you 🤗

Edited by ShyNomad - 10 years ago

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