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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: poetic

It was The X Files

Oh that's MUCH better 😆 I was worried for a little bit

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roneeta

@ronitfan

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Singing THE CIRCLE of LIIIFFEEE... 😆

😆

Oh GOD the images!

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: ronitfan

😆

Oh GOD the images!

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Now this seriously left me awestruck..

I'm not even able to point out which part I loved the most, because it will be so unfair to the rest of this highly magical piece.

The kitchen scene - just doing the dishes, was turned into something so meaningful and deep.

The bedroom scene - Ragini thinking about what love actually is. Absolutely beautifully explained. It is indeed such a small word for a very deep feeling. I believe love can only be felt and is more of an experience than only just a word/feeling.

And then them sharing a fragile moment together - the kiss. Tender and sweet, meaningful and deep. And fragile because I still think that, despite of being back together, they are still scared that this might break again. However, this time both will do whatever it takes so make this stronger than ever.

Really really really LOVED it. Kabhi kabhi, I'm just not able to find the right words to describe what your writing does to me but believe me that it leaves me speechless every time.

A gem you are! Thank you 🤗

Edited by metoyou - 9 years ago

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TiaMaaaaa

@TianaWrites

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Another piece of pure Magic❤️

Honestly, I had tears in my eyes after reading this... This was not sad but the sheer loveliness and the beauty of true love you have captured oh so beautifully in this piece, touched me... So beautiful❤️

True... love is such a small word that holds so many emotions❤️

So, he finally broke up with Nivedita👏 I am glad...

And when she said you are her and that's all that matters... It was💔

And they said I love you to each other... It was a simple yet oh so powerful confession❤️

And that Can I keep you reminded me of Casper... One of my favourite movies❤️

So much loveliness in such a small piece... Perfect👏

Thank you for writing this piece of beauty🤗

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sun29

@sun29

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#86

this is beautiful rachna.👏...you have this wonderful skill of making the simplest of the sequence come across so touching and moving...i loved how you grasped the whole emotions against the backdrop of a simple kitchen chore that spoke so much ...your dialogues ,the definitions the simple yet profound conversation ...a piece of work one would want to come back again and again ...

thank you so much...i really hope we see things as simple and beautiful in the show as well...like all things till now happened without much pomp other than few instances...i wish he does break up with nivedita without much drama ,not because her deeds are out in the open but simply because he cannot let go of his wife,their family again...his commitment and love for them is far more important than another drunken folly...

and the confession...simple yet poured out everything they kept buried in their heart..so beautiful...

this is romance for me ...this is a love story .👏

Edited by sun29 - 9 years ago