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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Santosh99

Di,
Thanks for sharing this with us di and i suggest you ki join creatives team and then slowly kick everybody out! 🤗 🥱


Hey Santosh 🤗

Thanks for your kind words. But let the CVs stay there 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: poetic



Hey Santosh🤗

Thanks for your kind words. But let the CVs stay there😉

Not anymore
Edited by Santosh99 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Let them be.

I just hope that the present episodes be good enough,😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: poetic



Thanks a lot Sushma🤗

Hope you are happy enough.

Very happyyy... Now waiting for ur next OS 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: poetic



🤗 Sweetie

Thank you so much and I am so happy you enjoyed reading it.

If this piece gives you happiness, then so be it. 😛


All your work gives me happiness be it the sad ones or the happy ones. Just knowing that you post something, brings a smile on my face 😃

The other one is still pending...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: metoyou


All your work gives me happiness be it the sad ones or the happy ones. Just knowing that you post something, brings a smile on my face 😃

The other one is still pending...



Thanks Mogwai 😳 I am glad you could read it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
This is so beautiful... 👏
How he longs for her in his dreams but feels himself unworthy:
I dream of her every night. No matter the dream, she always puts in an appearance. I suppose this is because she is as much a part of me as I myself am; I do not know whether I want to be the same to her, or whether that is a punishment for which she is undeserving.

His fear of losing her and yet being unable to move forward and just tell her what he knows she wants to hear:
But since this battle occurs only within my own mind, no matter the outcome, I am the conquered.

How many times in life are we frozen because we don't have the courage to make the changes we feel we need?

His pain at recognizing her pain, and yet still that sense of resignation and helplessness at the way things are:
I can feel her moving away from me, a little at a time. But she has been gone for so long ... anyway. And my heart aches ...

Your gorgeous lines at the end remind me of a poem that I think describes N/R well:

If You Forget Me"
Pablo Neruda

I want you to know
one thing.

You know how this is:
if I look
at the crystal moon, at the red branch
of the slow autumn at my window,
if I touch
near the fire
the impalpable ash
or the wrinkled body of the log,
everything carries me to you,
as if everything that exists,
aromas, light, metals,
were little boats
that sail
toward those isles of yours that wait for me.

Well, now,
if little by little you stop loving me
I shall stop loving you little by little.

If suddenly
you forget me
do not look for me,
for I shall already have forgotten you.

If you think it long and mad,
the wind of banners
that passes through my life,
and you decide
to leave me at the shore
of the heart where I have roots,
remember
that on that day,
at that hour,
I shall lift my arms
and my roots will set off
to seek another land.

But
if each day,
each hour,
you feel that you are destined for me
with implacable sweetness,
if each day a flower
climbs up to your lips to seek me,
ah my love, ah my own,
in me all that fire is repeated,
in me nothing is extinguished or forgotten,
my love feeds on your love, beloved,
and as long as you live it will be in your arms
without leaving mine.


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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Wow Nidhi that was just gorgeous...
What a beautiful poem! Had never read it before..thanks :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nidhi,
First of a 🤗 - a huge one for quoting this Pablo Neruda poem over here. One of his finest, but then aren't his entire collection so !

And thanks for those beautiful comments - they do mean a lot coming from you all.

Actually, I have nothing to say now - now that I read this Neruda. Thanks once again.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
This is pure MAGIC❤️
Oh so beautiful it is❤️

The whole thing revolves around Nachiket's fear, but the way you have written it makes me feel the same way he feels❤️

Such beauty

How she is moving away from him and how he tries to tell her how much he longs for her, yet all that ever comes out of his mouth are taunts... So beautiful, the way you have written it❤️

There's so much I wanted to say.

There's so much I needed you to hear.

These lines are my favourite❤️ it sums up all that he longs for... Wonderful👏

I so admire the way you write You take a simple concept and make it so beautiful

Thank you for this wonderful piece🤗

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