Vignette : Dreams Unbound ... - Page 3

Originally posted by: poetic

😆 I am like a panda only 😉

Originally posted by: neiralove

Why a panda? 😊

Originally posted by: neiralove

This was just MAGICAL! ❤️

The part when Ragini walks away from Nachiket totally reminded me the scene where Harry is talking to Dumbledore in limbo...it was beautifully described.

I am left to cling desperately to what is left me of her, and follow her, after an endless time -- or is it entirely too soon?-- along that same uncertain path.

This is just perfect. Nachiket's desperation to follow her and be with her again, even if it is just on the same path as her, sums up his longing for this relationship to be something more. And yet, his hesitation with following her, not knowing if that's what she wants or needs, is an exact replica of his hesitation to tell her how he really feels and find out whether she feels the same way.

In a world so full of hatred and ambiguous truths, every person deserves another to cling to, to derive comfort from, to take mutual pleasure with. More than any other person I have ever met, or likely will ever meet, she makes me whole. She completes me. And serendipitously I would like to believe the same - that I complete her. I would deny her nothing. I have decided.

Wow...you blew me away with that first line and the rest of the paragraph supplemented those emotions so well. Nachiket has finally reached that point of clarity in his emotional turmoil; yet, he is still unable to tell Ragini how he feels. But I'm glad that the cloud of confusion has drifted away; now all he needs to do is pull down that veil of indifference and open up to her again.

Rachna Di, as usual, you've left me speechless. The imagery and metaphors in this piece bring it to life for the reader and make it impossible to pull your eyes away. When I reached the last line, I felt Nachiket's longing in my stomach and that was just fabulous. I really hope that he finds a way to express himself, but until then, we can only hope.

Thank you, you wonderful little ball of magic, you! 🤗

Originally posted by: poetic

Thanks Shikha. 🤗

The Harry Potter stories have a lot to learn from , I feel. And you mentioned a rather poignant part of it.

I am sure that since Nachiket has now decided, he will hopefully take the next steps. This is good. I wrote this in office you know.

And if he doesn't open his mouth now, he will never get time to put his life back into track.

Originally posted by: metoyou

I'm not new to this forum but just don't post that much. However, I do read most of the stuff here and I must say that you guys rock.

This particular OS made to comment.

I have been reading your work since a long time, poetic (Rachna right?)

You are amazing and loved this one too.

Thanks!

Originally posted by: poetic

HUH 😲

Originally posted by: poetic

No, my project tanked.

Working on the next one.