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Posted: 9 years ago
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Now what kind of magic is this?

Such an emotional piece...outstandingly written! Wow, bravo!
True emotions, deep feelings. The way she wanted to forget that and how described her pain was so touching.

''It's over'' - seriously I was like ...no! He can not say that.

But then there was light at the end of the tunnel because she wanted to make this work... They both need each other so much, can't live without the other...

You crazy girl Shikha, this was beautiful! You have no idea.
Rachna is one lucky girl tonight with all the fabulous stories.

Thank you for this pagli! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Shiikha <3

In one word, this was gorgeous <3
Read this in the morning but could not comment earlier... this was the perfect way to begin my day after ending it with you guys and that image of Nachiket-Ragini hugging and cuddling in their sleep..

This was therapeutic in so many ways..
Thank you for this!! :D


Sukhi DI! <3

Thank you so much dear for your lovely words! You started your morning with this--that's enough for me 😳 Therapeutic ka toh pata nahin, but I'm glad you enjoyed it! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: RaginiJoshi

Awesome Shikha!!!

How much I loved it...Wow You have nailed it! Couldn't pick one single line..I loved it whole. What a birthday treat Rachna Di!!

Love you Shikha🤗


Ragini! 🤗

Thank you so much love! Writing these types of serious piece takes a lot of effort and I wasn't sure how it turned out--thank you so much for reading and liking it! ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: t-bonegirl

Shikha Shikha! Did I tell you I really loved this one! ❤️

You have written it beautifully. I could feel Ragini's pain. Especially this part
And every year for the past 15 years, on this day, she had gone through the day robotically, never pausing for anyone or anything. She had become habituated to ignoring her mother's questioning look, her desire to make sure her daughter was ok.

My poor Ragini..

He saw relief for the first time in days, peace for the first time in months, happiness for the first time in years,

So want Nachiket to see the pain in her eyes and the glow when she is around him. I wish this happens in the show. So needed..
This was perfect Shikha. The idea was really great. Marriage anniversary. Both of them in pain all day yet refused to show it to the other.

And you ended it perfectly.😳
No matter what happened in the past, today he was her husband and she was his wife.

Thank you so much darling for writing this! 🤗 ❤️


Sanam, I'm so happy you liked this! ❤️ Thank you for reading and providing feedback and re-reading and re-providing feedback 😆 🤗

Everything is so painful for our Nachiket and Ragini right now, I wonder how they are going to survive...😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: metoyou

Now what kind of magic is this?

Such an emotional piece...outstandingly written! Wow, bravo!
True emotions, deep feelings. The way she wanted to forget that and how described her pain was so touching.

''It's over'' - seriously I was like ...no! He can not say that.

But then there was light at the end of the tunnel because she wanted to make this work... They both need each other so much, can't live without the other...

You crazy girl Shikha, this was beautiful! You have no idea.
Rachna is one lucky girl tonight with all the fabulous stories.

Thank you for this pagli! 🤗


Magic?! 😕 Get out of the hangover of your OS, you're unable to understand how much bullshit you just read 😆

They do need each other so much; they've become so dependent on each other's memories that having the other right there in the flesh and needing to keep their distance is just TOO much

Thank you for reading and liking it darling! 🤗 ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: neiralove


Magic?! 😕 Get out of the hangover of your OS, you're unable to understand how much bullshit you just read 😆

They do need each other so much; they've become so dependent on each other's memories that having the other right there in the flesh and needing to keep their distance is just TOO much

Thank you for reading and liking it darling! 🤗 ❤️


Pagal ho tum! Ek doongi if you say one more time that this is bullshit! Stop it now.
I loved it BAS!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: metoyou


Pagal ho tum! Ek doongi if you say one more time that this is bullshit! Stop it now.
I loved it BAS!


Mujh par haath uthaoge? 😲 😈
Edited by neiralove - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: shai25

I had tears in my eyes reading this! So beautifully written! Happy birthday rachna di :)


Sorry I missed this! Oh gosh, I really hope you weren't actually crying! Thanks for reading though :)
Edited by neiralove - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Shikha!!!
This was so good. Nachiket seeing her cry because she feels helpless is what we want. He can not see that. <3 <3
I had read this when you posted but couldn't comment and then I didn't know if I have commented or not. :P This was beautiful! I am glad she made his hands go around her waist at the end. <3 <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: neiralove


Ragini! 🤗

Thank you so much love! Writing these types of serious piece takes a lot of effort and I wasn't sure how it turned out--thank you so much for reading and liking it! ❤️


Kya Shikha tum bhi! I don't believe how you girls can be unsure after writing such beautiful beautiful stuff! First Narges, Sanam and now you! Aisa hai, to mujhe kitna hona chahiye😆

Just loved! Read it 4 times till now

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