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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: metoyou

I knew you would like that one the most! And she has done a very good by writing it exactly the same way 😃

Aww thank you! I just knew that one would be your favorite! 😆

Thanks Narges! 😳

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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: ShyNomad
Shikha,
This is heartbreaking and beautiful ❤️

The way you describe their pain and loneliness, each too afraid to read what is in the other's eyes...

And every year for the past 15 years, on this day, she had gone through the day robotically, never pausing for anyone or anything. She had become habituated to ignoring her mother's questioning look, her desire to make sure her daughter was ok. She refused to look at the calendar all day in the hospital and even switched her computer's time to display September 6 instead. She couldn't answer the casual "How are you?" that people dropped into her unwilling lap when they stopped by for a favor from the administrative head. She purposefully dated papers incorrectly whenever Nishi or Aarav had needed her signature on a school form. And she retired every night to her room, leaving the light on and staring at their wedding album, streaking the pictures with her tears.
😭
And at the end how they needed to heal together after finally recognizing the other's struggle - Gorgeous. Thank you for this. 👏

Rachna,
Happy Birthday and many happy returns of the day to you! 🥳Thanks for all you do.

Nidhi!

Thank you so much for reading and posting such lovely words, dear! I'm really glad that you liked it 😊

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roneeta

@ronitfan

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Shiikha <3

In one word, this was gorgeous <3

Read this in the morning but could not comment earlier... this was the perfect way to begin my day after ending it with you guys and that image of Nachiket-Ragini hugging and cuddling in their sleep..

This was therapeutic in so many ways..

Thank you for this!! :D

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Ragini Joshi

@RaginiJoshi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Awesome Shikha!!!

How much I loved it...Wow You have nailed it! Couldn't pick one single line..I loved it whole. What a birthday treat Rachna Di!!

Love you Shikha🤗

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: ronitfan
Shiikha <3
In one word, this was gorgeous <3
Read this in the morning but could not comment earlier... this was the perfect way to begin my day after ending it with you guys and that image of Nachiket-Ragini hugging and cuddling in their sleep..

This was therapeutic in so many ways..
Thank you for this!! :D

Can I cuddle once? No puns intended.

Can't sleep after watching Ragini MMS and The Conjuring yesterday, one after the other.

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roneeta

@ronitfan

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: poetic

Can I cuddle once? No puns intended.

Can't sleep after watching Ragini MMS and The Conjuring yesterday, one after the other.

Hahahhaaha

Why on Earth would you watch both of them on the same day?

Please watch Kate and Leopold na.. that's the closest to cuddling.. YouTube pe hai movie 😳

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shai25

@shai25

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

I had tears in my eyes reading this! So beautifully written! Happy birthday rachna di :)

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: shai25
I had tears in my eyes reading this! So beautifully written! Happy birthday rachna di :)

Thanks Shai 😃

@ Sukhs - Sleeping only when I am physically exhausted, with lights on.

Ok, I will not be a kebab mein haddi ... but I could do wonders with a cuddle 😕

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roneeta

@ronitfan

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: poetic

Thanks Shai 😃

@ Sukhs - Sleeping only when I am physically exhausted, with lights on.

Ok, I will not be a kebab mein haddi ... but I could do wonders with a cuddle 😕

hehehe you're not a kabab mei haddi don't worry 😆

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Sanam

@t-bonegirl

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Shikha Shikha! Did I tell you I really loved this one! ❤️

You have written it beautifully. I could feel Ragini's pain. Especially this part

And every year for the past 15 years, on this day, she had gone through the day robotically, never pausing for anyone or anything. She had become habituated to ignoring her mother's questioning look, her desire to make sure her daughter was ok.

My poor Ragini..

He saw relief for the first time in days, peace for the first time in months, happiness for the first time in years,

So want Nachiket to see the pain in her eyes and the glow when she is around him. I wish this happens in the show. So needed..

This was perfect Shikha. The idea was really great. Marriage anniversary. Both of them in pain all day yet refused to show it to the other.

And you ended it perfectly.😳

No matter what happened in the past, today he was her husband and she was his wife.

Thank you so much darling for writing this! 🤗 ❤️