F.F: Filmy NEIRA Final update (Neil Proposes Ragini on Page 19) - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago

Comments in your style bhai

My favorite dialogues
[1] "Stop dear, Tumhe bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai. I know yeh romeo tumhare peeche haat dhokar padha hai - I would say yeh nachiket haat dohkar nahi pura nahadohkar peeche padha😆

[2] Mere dost Karan ki kasam. Agar mein jhoot bol raha hun to us ke sar k saare baal jhad jaye.- 🤣🤣🤣 hilarious dialogue
And the most hilarious dialogues

[3] And how neil innocently asked to Karan mere bhai tu kaha tha subah se. Aa ja tujhe lunch karata hun. Bata kaise khayega lunch mere haaton se ya pair se. neil aur karan ke chakkar to bade hai!
And next [4]Neil puts his arm on Karan's shoulder and says "Karan tu duniya mein mistake se aaya toh naturally tu har baar mistake hi karega🤣
dharti ka bhoj🤣 Bichara karan dosti k chakkar mein kya kya karn sunna padha hai😭

[5] And finally the twist in the story Dumbo nivi is back!

Overall a very good update

Please update soon
Edited by Santosh99 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
BHAAI, this is awesome :P

Can't get over Nachiket's Proposal :P It was so cute ;)

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Posted: 9 years ago
🤣
I can't stop laughing. I need to read this one again.

My best part - Karan ke baal jhad jaye ... 😆 Lol

That was a damn sweet proposal. And you involved the dhoklas beautifully. Dhoklaben would be so happy.

I love the Rk - Pam over here.

But I wonder how they are all in the same class.


Thanks a lot Mak
.now I am so interested in reading the next part.
Edited by poetic - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Uff! So filmy!! :D
What conversations! :D College ki yaad as gai.. :(
Next update sooner please! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Santosh99


Comments in your style bhai

My favorite dialogues
[1] "Stop dear, Tumhe bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai. I know yeh romeo tumhare peeche haat dhokar padha hai - I would say yeh nachiket haat dohkar nahi pura nahadohkar peeche padha😆

[2] Mere dost Karan ki kasam. Agar mein jhoot bol raha hun to us ke sar k saare baal jhad jaye.- 🤣🤣🤣 hilarious dialogue
And the most hilarious dialogues

[3] And how neil innocently asked to Karan mere bhai tu kaha tha subah se. Aa ja tujhe lunch karata hun. Bata kaise khayega lunch mere haaton se ya pair se. neil aur karan ke chakkar to bade hai!
And next [4]Neil puts his arm on Karan's shoulder and says "Karan tu duniya mein mistake se aaya toh naturally tu har baar mistake hi karega🤣
dharti ka bhoj🤣 Bichara karan dosti k chakkar mein kya kya karn sunna padha hai😭

[5] And finally the twist in the story Dumbo nivi is back!

Overall a very good update

Please update soon


Bhai, Thanks for liking and reading the update😊

Karan is Neil's student in this FF toh obviously bahut kuch sunega Neil se😆

Highlighted ones are my favorite too😆. Yes twist aaya hai but let me assure you it will be wind up in the next update. No Vamp wala drama here as she is dumbo in this FF😆

Thanks for enjoying Bhai and will try to update super soon😃




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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: poetic

🤣

I can't stop laughing. I need to read this one again.

My best part - Karan ke baal jhad jaye ... 😆 Lol

That was a damn sweet proposal. And you involved the dhoklas beautifully. Dhoklaben would be so happy.

I love the Rk - Pam over here.

But I wonder how they are all in the same class.


Thanks a lot Mak
.now I am so interested in reading the next part.


Thanks a lot Rachna Di for enjoying this update😃. Yes that Karan k baal jhad jaye is my favorite part too😆.

I am happy that you laughed while reading this update. I am total khush khush with your feedback😃

Dhoklas were last minute addition as i was out of options😆.

Thank you for loving RK & Pam jodi and just aise hi add kardiya ek class me sab ko as anything is possible in Filmy Stuff😆

Please do read again Rachna Di😊 and I will try to update the next one soon and will certainly go more filmy😃😃


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: loveleen3

Uff! So filmy!! :D
What conversations! :D College ki yaad as gai.. :(
Next update sooner please! :)


Thanks Loveleen for enjoying this update😊. Yes College ki yaad aati hai😕

The conversations made me grin too while writing it😆. Will update the next part soon😃




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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hamna19khan

BHAAI, this is awesome :P

Can't get over Nachiket's Proposal :P It was so cute ;)


Thanks a lot Hamnu😃 for loving the Nachiket's Baba proposal.

But me still 😕😕😕 IQHMUINHU 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mansur bhai!

This was so great! I was laughing throughout the whole piece! 😆

Neil: Mere dost Karan ki kasam. Agar mein jhoot bol raha hun to us ke sar k saare baal jhad jaye.
So this is how that happened! 😆 Oops... 😆 😳

Neil puts his arm on Karan's shoulder and says "Karan tu duniya mein mistake se aaya toh naturally tu har baar mistake hi karega😆".
🤣 🤣 🤣

And the dhokla proposal was just !

Thanks for writing this lovely update and I hope Ragini gives Nachiket the answer he's looking for in the next update! 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: neiralove

Mansur bhai!

This was so great! I was laughing throughout the whole piece! 😆

Neil: Mere dost Karan ki kasam. Agar mein jhoot bol raha hun to us ke sar k saare baal jhad jaye.
So this is how that happened! 😆 Oops... 😆 😳

Neil puts his arm on Karan's shoulder and says "Karan tu duniya mein mistake se aaya toh naturally tu har baar mistake hi karega😆".
🤣 🤣 🤣

And the dhokla proposal was just !

Thanks for writing this lovely update and I hope Ragini gives Nachiket the answer he's looking for in the next update! 😉


Thanks Shikha for loving this update😊. I am happy that you enjoyed this update throughout!😳

Yes Aise hi Karan k baal gaye hai😆😆

The mentioned parts were my favorite too😆. Thank you so much for liking the dhokla proposal😳

As Pam-RK story is done😆 abhi karan-Dimpy ki story baki hai in filmy style😆 and yes Ragini will answer to Nachiket soon in truest filmy way possible😆

Will update soon😃
Edited by MansurKhan56 - 9 years ago

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