Hello Friends. This is Mansur Ali (MAK56) with my Partner, a well-known name of this FF World Zainab Sidd have started this Filmy FF based on our IKNMP beloved NEIRA. This is the first basic update written by both of us from our Group ID Neiraholics as like y'all we are in complete awe of the cute relationship of Ragini & Nachiket.
Please go through this Filmy story & help us with your valuable comments which will inspire us to write more😛 Your feedback is always more than welcome😃
Index:
1) Introduction of Characters: Page no:1
2) Neira Showdown: Page no:4
3) Neil & Ragini Friendship: Page no:6
4) Neil Face off Goons: Page no:9
5) Neil's Proposal: Page no:13
6) Neil & Ragini's Nok Jhok's: Page no:17
7) Neil Proposes Ragini: Page no:19
So without wasting your time any further, let's zoom ahead with our Filmy Story😃
F.F: Filmy NEIRA:
NEIL + RAGINI + PAM + FILMY RK + KARAN + DIMPY + Nivedita (Dumbo)
NEIL, KARAN, PAM, DIMPY, RK, Nivedita are friends from their childhood days. They are now all set to study together in the Fictional City College. Here we go ahead.
1. Introduction of Characters:
Dimpy: Hi Pam!
Pam: Hi Dimpy. Aww my Jaan! (Hugs). How are you Darling, I was missing you sooo much😆
Dimpy: I am perfectly fine sweet heart. I was missing you too. How are you by the way
Pam: I am fine Honey! These holidays were torture for me. I was so waiting to come back from U.S to meet you up.
Dimpy: Same feelings Pam. Tumne kaha aur mein yaha tumhare saat college admission le liya. Where is my Friend Handsome dashing hunk Neil😉, Wo dekhai nahi de raha!
Pam: Don't you know him. He is a late lateef?😆 He will be here at any moment.
Dimpy: Wo to hai, Neil is such a late lateef when it comes to studies. Acha tum bol rahi thi ki tumhari kisi friend ne bhi yaha admission liya hai. Kaun hai woh aur kaha hai
Pam: Don't worry! My bestie will be here at any moment. For sure, I'll introduce her with you. By the way, Karan k baare me nahi puchogi. Kitna chahta hai tumhe
Dimpy: No way! Us Motu k baare me mein kyu puchu. Us ka baare me sochi hun to mera Blood pressure high ho jata hai.
Pam (Teases): Kitna pasand karta hai karan tujhe honey. Tumhe dekhta hi to seedha tere peeche padh jata hai.
Dimpy: Naam bhi mat lo us chipku karan ka. Kitna difference usme aur R.K me. She says R.K bhi to tumhe dekhte hi Filmy or Shayarana ho jata hai.
Pam: Ab tum mujhe sataane ki koshish kar rahi ho Dimpy. Aur waise bhi R.K ne yaha admission nahi liya, mein to bach gayi. Yeh Neil maharaj abhi tak nahi aaye college ko.
Suddenly, A thundering breeze blows across the Lawn & a song plays "Bachna aaye Haseeno lo mein aagaya" as it is a signature entrance of our hero Neil who is being followed by his chela Karan.
Dimpy: Pam Lo Talk of the Devil. Tumhara handsome hunk bhai Neil aa raha hai aur uska side kick Karan bhi. Mein aj pehle din hi bhaag jaati hun ghar k liye wo karan mujhe dekha to phir se peeche padh jayega.
Karan is madly in love with Dimpy & he is taking flirting & romantic tips from our Neil to impress her.
Neil: Karan woh dekh! Abhi Teri Dimpy Pam k saat baat kar rahi thi. Tujhe dekhar class chodkar bhaag gayi.
Karan: Dimpy stop! stop! Chale gayi.
Neil: Karan! Tu uska peecha chod de. Tujhse Nahi ho payega usse impress karna!
Karan: Tere ho te hue mein usse impress nahi kar paya to tere liye Neil sharm ki baat hai. Dhitkaar hai tere talent par😆
Neil: Tu aj kal bahut bolne bhi laga hai karan. He slaps hard on his bulgy stomach & says "yeh pet tere raaste ki haddi hai, Is par asal dhitkaar hai😆
Karan: Bhai yeh bulgy stomach to Khaandani Nishaani hai. Sirf kismat walo ko aata hai yeh, R.K badnaseeb hai usse nahi aya.
Neil & Karan while talking to each other reaches his classroom where Pam is waiting for him. He comes and hugs Pam "My sissy kaisi ho!. Karan greets Pam too.
Pam: Neil Tumhe kitni baar bola yeh Karan ko saat mat rakho. Iski harkato se mere friends bahut chidte hai particularly Dimpy!
Neil: Pam Pam! Karan bechara use pyaar karta hai. Koshish kar raha hai usse agree karane k liye. Agar maani to theek hai nahi to wo chod dega peecha. Pehle class me chalo, Lecturer Khurana aa rahe honge.
Once Neil enters the class, his masculine personality & stylish looks with charming attitude immediately becomes a center of attraction of the females as they have never such charismatic guy before! He gets admired with praises, cute stares & whistles. Neil blows kisses and hugs in return as a token for their love!
The Glamorous but a Dumbo Nivedita enters the scene😆😆
(Slight change) - Pam hates Nivedita!
Nivedita greets Pam, Karn & hugs Neil.
Karan utters with a sad face "Aise hugs mujhe kyu nahi milte"
Pam: Milenge bhi kaise, tumhara pet jo beech me aa jata hai!
Neil: Oh my cute Nivi. How are you? Mein to bahut miss kar raha tha
Nivedita: Jhute kahi ke tum ne mujhe miss kabhi karte hi nahi! She rolls her finger on Neil's broad chest and says "Agar Miss kiya hota to mera phone kyu nahi uthaya tumhne. Kam se kam 50 baar phone kiya tumhare ghar k number par in holidays, voice mails bhi drop kiye. Pam se bhi pucha to usne kaha ki tumne new phone number liya hi nahi".
Neil: Kab kiya Phone. Mujhe to koi voice mail nahi mila tumhara Nivi!
While Pam murmurs to Karan "Kitna Chipakti hai Neil se yeh duffer chipkali Nivedita"😆
Nivedita: Oh tumhe nahi aya phone to phir meine kisko phone kiya tha😆. Shayad wrong number save karliya hoga tumhare Name par. Acha abh tumhara phone number dedo, so that I can call you later in the evening.
Neil: "Sure. Now I got a new number, you can call me at any point of time" while looking at Pam (he knows that it was his sister's handiwork). In order to irritate Pam, Neil ask "My sweet Nivi class k baad coffee peene jaate hai cafeteria me"?
Nivedita: Kyun nahi Neil. Tumhare saat to mein midnight me bhi coffee peene k liye ready hun. Mein to kehti hun abhi chalte hai coffee date k liye.
Neil murmurs "Yeh Dumbo Nivedita to abhi k abhi gaale pad gayi". He says "Abhi nahi Nivi! Class shuru hone wali hai. Baad me jayenge".
Nivedita: Ok Neil. Jaisa tum chaho, magar baad me zaroor chalna! Mein apni seat se tumhe dekhte rahungi!
Neil: Aur tumhe dekhta rahunga Nivi!
(Karan tries to calm Pam who was seething in anger thanks to the flirty convo of his bro and the Nivedita which unfolded before her own eyes)
While taking their places in class, Pam erupts on Neil "Kyu tum us dumbo Nivedita ko laga kar idhar udhar ghumte ho Neil aur mujhe chida te rahte ho.
Neil: Pam Pam! Ghussa mat ho. Wo toh time pass k liye hai. Aur haan Yeh ghussa aur seriousness bacha kar rakho, R.K aane wala hai thodi der me.
Pam: RRRKKK! Tumne to kaha tha ki wo admission nahi lene wala hai is college ko. Zaroor is motu karan ne usse upsaya hoga yaha admission lene k liye?
Neil: Bilkul sahi kaha. Karan ne R.K bataya ki tumne is college me admission liya hai. Aur usse to tum jaanti ho wo Immediately ready hogaya.
Pam: Karan mein tumhars pet phod dungi!!!!
Karan: Sorry Pam. Galti se baat nikal gayi. Infact R.K college pohachne wala hai. Sorry!
Pam: Mein ja rahi hun college se. Agar R.K yaha par hai to Mujhe nahi rehna hai yaha par.
R.K Enters the class from the backdoor of the class as he knows that Pam will run away once she sees him coming. He goes up in his filmy style "Tu jaha jaha chalega, mera saaya saat hoga. Pam I was missing you so much, I am sure tumne bhi mujhe miss kiya"
Pam (Trademark Style): Shut up R.K! Stop being so filmy😛, Meine tumhe bilkul bhi nahi miss kiya.
R.K (Filmy Mode): Pam mein tumhe miss na karo aisa ho nahi sakta aur tum mujhe miss na karo aisa mein hargiz nahi hone dunga. Pam mujhe yaha padhne me koi interest nahi hai, mein to bas aagaya tumhare peeche saaya banker.
Neil: Kaisa hai mera bhai R.K tu? Meine to tujhe bahut miss kiya!
R.K: Mein theek hun aur tumhe bahut miss kiya mere saale sahab. Tum sunao tum kaise ho aur Pam kaisi hai bcz yeh to mujhe bolegi nahi k yeh kaisi hai.
Neil: Hum dono theek hai!
R.K : Pyaar jo karta hun Pam se Neil school days se. Aur yeh hai k maanti nahi hai ki yeh bhi mujhse pyaar karti hai. Tujhe to koi objection nahi hai na Neil mere pyaar se?
Neil: Bilkul bhi nahi. Magar tu pehle Pam ko raazi karle, meri taraf se to haan hai.
Pam says Meri taraf se Na hai Neil.
Suddenly Lecturer Khurana enters... (He is a master in teaching as well as a master in firing Saliva on other's faces while he talking)
Professor Khurana utters "Good Morning Class I am Lecturer Khurana.
Pam: EEE Neil yeh admi saliva udha raha hai
Neil murmurs "Karan, R.K & Pam yeh admi to Saliva phenkne wali machine hai". Kal se Helmet pehen kar aayenge.
Professor Khurana : Lets starts with Y'all introduction... He comes towards Karan & says introduce urself!
Neil murmurs "Mote tu to gaya, ab jhel saliva"
Pam, Nivedita & R.K keeps giggling at Karan.
Karan gets up & wishes dil hi dil me "God grant me strength to handle this saliva". He quotes "Hi Sir, I am Karan & I am a friend of my friend Neil. Ab ap Neil se introduction lijiye
Professor Khurana (Firing Saliva): Oh Handsome Young Man!😆 Apna Introduction do jaldi se!
Neil gets up to introduce himself & only to clean his face with a kerchief😆, he says "Sir I am Neil & goes stuck because he is completely distracted by a Cool breeze😛 which starts to blow across the Class room (Signature entrance of😛 our Sweet yet beautiful Ragini). Neil's ears are mesmerized by the musical footsteps of the approaching beauty, his eyes automatically shift its focus towards the door looking for the beautiful creature & they go in complete "AWE" because our Neil has never such a cute & beautiful girl in her life😛. Her dark Hairs, deep sea like eyes, Fair & simple cute looks gives a hard slap on his heart😆
Ragini ask Professor Khurana in her sweet melodious voice "Can I come in Sir?"😃😛😉
Rag's cute looks & her melodious voice takes our Neil into some fairy dreamy duniya and yet he grabs Karan's collar to say "Karan yehi to hai woh ladki jiska mujhe barso pehle se intezaar tha"😆😆😆
To be continued...
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