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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: neiralove
Rachana Di! 🤗

First, thank you so much for writing this! ❤️

The way Ragini and Nachiket are hesitant about each other's love is beyond adorable! And the way he pulls the hair from her bun is so cute and sexy 😳 And the ending--maar hi daala!

I really admire your work because you are able to capture raw emotions and thoughts so effortlessly in your writing, which is something I can't do at all. Thank you for being here and sharing your work with all of us 😊 ❤️

Hi Shikha 🤗

You happy? Me happy 😃 I am so excited cos this was a bit difficult to write. And believe it or not, I have already noticed the loopholes 😆

Their relation in itself is so beautiful, that writing about them makes it worth the while.

😳

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: goldstar678
Another Master piece as usuall.I always like the way you always comeup with the words you use to describe Raginis inner feelings i think you undertsnad her the most.And what should i say about the Neira emotions you describe,not just in this piece be it happy moments,sad moments .They are just perfect.

They can speak volumes through the way they just look at each other.They dont need to express single word.

Thanks for posting Rachana.

Thanks Pavan 😃

Am not sure if I understand Ragini the best, but yes, this is how I would have liked to see her, more sensitive and a bit more enigmatic. 😳 Nachiket Bhaisaab ki toh bolti bandh .. 😉

Yes, these two can speak volumes without uttering a word. So I hate it when N disrespects her. 😕

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: poetic

Baap re 😆 Thanks for waxing eloquence.

I enjoyed writing it, and am happy you enjoyed reading it. 😛

I always believe that their love and life is magic - they are such beautiful souls, and so in love. You are right. I rote this to indicate the soft steps they are taking to reach other other, and be a part of THE whole.😳

I love these duffers, kya karein ?

Kya karoon Rachna...I am besharam types with a very badtameez dil. I say what I feel 😉😆

Magic they are for sure...seriously, one of the most rare couples ever! 😳

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: metoyou

Kya karoon Rachna...I am besharam types with a very badtameez dil. I say what I feel 😉😆
Magic they are for sure...seriously, one of the most rare couples ever! 😳

Koi baat nahin. I like the idea of the badtameez dil. 😆

As for these two, they are beautiful, hot, passionate and sexy! AB kya karein ! 😳

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

AB...Bohot kuch karna padhega 😉

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: metoyou
AB...Bohot kuch karna padhega 😉

Jaise? 😆

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: poetic

Jaise? 😆

We just spoke about expressing the love out loud right... well, the ideas are linked to that love 😉

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roneeta

@ronitfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

This is black magic... it really is, Rachana..

because I cannot think of anything else but them and pure love after reading this one.. this has really taken over my senses.. each and every word is so beautifully crafted and you've taken such immense care to write from both their POVs which is so difficult and yet so endearing to a reader..

You really get them.. the angst, the quiet desperation and the hopelessness tinged with anxiety of the small possibility of finding love in each other again... WOW.. blows my mind away each and every time you write, dear..

You are LOVELY!

Thank you for this gem!

❤️

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: ronitfan
This is black magic... it really is, Rachana..

because I cannot think of anything else but them and pure love after reading this one.. this has really taken over my senses.. each and every word is so beautifully crafted and you've taken such immense care to write from both their POVs which is so difficult and yet so endearing to a reader..

You really get them.. the angst, the quiet desperation and the hopelessness tinged with anxiety of the small possibility of finding love in each other again... WOW.. blows my mind away each and every time you write, dear..

You are LOVELY!
Thank you for this gem!

❤️

Black magic? Huh! 😆