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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lord, you girls.
If this is Twitter's Nachiket Khanna, then no chances girls. He's hopelessly in love with @RaginiPatelsays ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: poetic


Oh My Goodness. That's one of my favourite songs from the movie Hanste Oakham, the other being Betaab Dil Ki Tamanna ... 😊

I mean, how can lyrics be both evocative and innocent at the same time. WOW, WOW, super WOW ! And to think of it as a child I cringed at these songs when they were played on Chitrahaar. 😕

Thank you so much for reading and also for reminding the Work in Progress stories 😆. Actually, I start thinking of what I should write to continue them, but end up inevitably with One Shots. 😳

You are right when you say that sometimes one has to take the first step to correct the mistakes. The others will eventually cooperate.
Thanks once again. 😳



Betaab dil ki tamanna is my other favorite too 😃
And I soo agree to the part in bold, the words were so magically woven that you'd only sit and wonder how they come up with such beautiful stuff.

Chitrahar ke baad ki generation se hu no idea but yes I do have a huge collection of old songs and Kishor Kumar is my favorite 😳

Please continue the story you started the other day (sorry I don't recollect the name right now) with Powai lake wali date. I'll come back to remind you of the others eventually 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Appreciations have always been an under-statement for your imaginations and your writings ..

Like before .. I don't find anything new in it ... *Speechless* as before.. Fabulous..

Don't know how much can I appreciate .. it's never enough ..

Don't know if this has got anything to do with a request I had once made you to write something on the immediate near future .. (comment)
( OS in Your Arms -

Anyways .. A Big Thank You .. I always wanted you to write something on it .. I knew you were the only person who can do it perfectly .. And so have you done it .. Always true to your handle.. You are truly POETIC ..

Don't know if you ever had this in mind while writing this one .. but one of your previous OS: ForEver Always .. (https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/itna-karo-na-mujhe-pyaar/4309707/os-forever-always) perfectly describes the scene, the next morning .. I connected the dots.. Don't know if you intended .. But it fits perfectly..

You're a gifted Writer ..

Please Keep Writing ..
All the Best ..

BlueMoon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: poetic

Lord, you girls.

If this is Twitter's Nachiket Khanna, then no chances girls. He's hopelessly in love with @RaginiPatelsays ...



Then what is he doing here😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Then what is he doing here😆


Dreaming about the vacation 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Betaab dil ki tamanna is my other favorite too 😃
And I soo agree to the part in bold, the words were so magically woven that you'd only sit and wonder how they come up with such beautiful stuff.

Chitrahar ke baad ki generation se hu no idea but yes I do have a huge collection of old songs and Kishor Kumar is my favorite 😳

Please continue the story you started the other day (sorry I don't recollect the name right now) with Powai lake wali date. I'll come back to remind you of the others eventually 😆


Yes. Another beautiful song - it's a poetry actually - kahin karti hogi woh era intezaar ... So melodious and so romantic. makes you start believing in love once again.

Yes, that story is a WIP - Aienkien 😳 Its going to be only 4 - 5 updates, so I will definitely try to finish that. i did write a part, but I am not happy. So will have to re-write.

But please do remind me ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: poetic


Dreaming about the vacation 😆


Rachna...

Your one OS ... Nachiket khanna is already here !!😳


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: BlueMoon8


Appreciations have always been an under-statement for your imaginations and your writings ..

Like before .. I don't find anything new in it ... *Speechless* as before.. Fabulous..

Don't know how much can I appreciate .. it's never enough ..

Don't know if this has got anything to do with a request I had once made you to write something on the immediate near future .. (comment)
( OS in Your Arms -

Anyways .. A Big Thank You .. I always wanted you to write something on it .. I knew you were the only person who can do it perfectly .. And so have you done it .. Always true to your handle.. You are truly POETIC ..

Don't know if you ever had this in mind while writing this one .. but one of your previous OS: ForEver Always .. (https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/itna-karo-na-mujhe-pyaar/4309707/os-forever-always) perfectly describes the scene, the next morning .. I connected the dots.. Don't know if you intended .. But it fits perfectly..

You're a gifted Writer ..

Please Keep Writing ..
All the Best ..

BlueMoon


WOW! What do I say to this post? I appreciate this kindness and encouragement, truly. 😃

coming to the story, yes I did remember your request in the other thread. Did think about it too, but didn't get anything immediately to asp my fingers around. But yes, THIS OS is surely something in the immediate future. there may be a 2nd part or so, but I am still not sure. 😊

The other OS you mentioned - that's in another time and place. That's too much opulence.

Here, the morning after is going to be different. 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vidya_Bng


Rachna...

Your one OS ... Nachiket khanna is already here !!😳



Vidya, I have written a couple before. I guess he was here, because maybe R is not speaking to him ... aise hi 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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As Rachna said, he might have been here before lekin ab woh finally saamne aa gaya because Rachna took him to the place he wants to be...the sea with his Ragini

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