Resurgence | Arshi FF | Thread 1 | Thread 2 link posted on page 149 - Page 93

Originally posted by: Ashviniv

No Arpita u don't have to change anything. I think if there is a confusion because sometimes its hard to remember every little nuances from earlier chapters. Also this story sees spirited debate. Some of the perceived notions also feel as true cause everyone is invested

So I don't believe u will have to change anything. We are just too invested in story that sometimes we project our thoughts out which might not be in line to the story

Originally posted by: VeiledWords

Guys, at this point I honestly believe we are missing out on things mentioned in the FF. Things which have actually happened and are not speculations.

And now I’m starting to wonder if it’s the length of the chapters. Please let me know if I should cut it down because I’ve noticed a few confusions. I’d rather write shorter, more precise chapters than create this confusion.

I’ll reiterate a few things. Not from my comments, but exactly as they had happened in the FF.

Here are those few things -

- Arnav didn’t go running back to Umanagar like an entitled lunatic after hurting Khushi . He had almost backed out completely when he went to his old home and cried. He was worried sick about how the village would treat a divorcee and still only took care of things from afar like not letting the reporters reach her. It was only the note which revealed khushi wanted him and Shyam Jha’s name that pushed him to frenzy (A good thing in the hindsight because panchayat justice system is archaic and barbaric)

- Similarly, khushi didn’t agree to the second marriage right away. She was hurting, depressed and OVERHEARD that her parents were planning to uproot their whole lives and move away from Umanagar because the stigma was that brutal. She wanted to work, but not at the cost of her parents piece of mind and seclusion. Her dad did tell her about the dilemma he was facing. How would anyone react if your parent tells you that they won’t be able to find peace even on their deathbed. Sadly, it’s the society’s truth. Khushi went to Umanagar in the first place because her parents had stopped talking.

- Arnav had recalled being RELIEVED when Khushi didn’t get pregnant. Which means Khushi was right in Assessing that he did not want this at all. She was just trying not to force a child on him and find her way back to her husband. Arnav has mused that he felt guilty about that relief. Easily the reason they fell out even more badly.

- Khushi had trusted elders to the point of blindness. Arnav had said ‘she wouldn’t think our elders had done anything wrong if they stood next to a dead body with a bloodied knife’. I’m sure it sounds far fetched but you have to again consider the background. Even in my family, you don’t ever talk back or deny an elder anything. It’s almost oppressive, but it’s the reality in places like these. Not talking back, is in line with her character especially when she’s trying to mend things between two very adamant people.

She KNOWS Arnav misses his family even if he says otherwise because in his own way, he takes care of them. This is precisely why she apologised to him when in frustration she asked if ‘their desires even mattered to Arnav’. She knew she hurt him and was immediately apologetic.

- Arnav’s lawyer had asked why he doesn’t want to tell Khushi about Lavanya. Back then, he was sure of divorce and said if she had agreed, there’s no reason to hurt her more. However when he went to get her back, he has confessed to Akash that he will tell Khushi about Lavanya and then everything depends on her decision. He ONLY went back to get her away from that place… as he said to both Akash and Payal.

- Arnav and anamika’s relationship. Arnav was the one who was aware of the responsibilities and wanted to stay away. Anamika CONVINCED him otherwise. He was terrified that Khushi wasn’t happy with him either. At that time, he was doing the best he can.

- Khushi constantly made efforts in the last year. It says that Arnav’s repeated shut downs finally got to her. Even then Arnav told her that by waiting for him, she was adding to his stress. For all that we’ve seen Khushi doing, we know this is the last thing she would do.

I know lot of questions are still unanswered and that is by design. A lot of things are still speculative and I’ll patiently answer all those in the next few chapters.

But I can’t help but feel that There are so many things like these which are getting lost between the words. Things which have happened in the FF already. I’m seriously contemplating cutting down the length of the chapter, I’m not sure if that would be a good solution, because one chapter or two, things are going to be just as messy. So I’d really appreciate some feedback’s here.

Now we do say things like that because we really get carried away by the emotions. Honestly, the story how its able to do it, I am not sure but it is so well written that it’s forcing many of us to just say what we want. And we kind of times don’t have the emotional strength to read previous chapters.

Also, for me the main problem with Arnav going to Umanagar and bringing Khushi back was he did not ask her whether she wanted to come back or not. Of course I understand he might realise the dangers of panchayat more but Khushi deserved to be asked. I know he had mused that if there was something wrong in the alliance even Khushi will not be able to stop him.

Also, Arnav is a practical man, if Khushi wants that divorce he will give it to her. Call me sadist but I really want him to beg her for her forgiveness. He did that in ch 9 but I want him to do more. Those are my only thoughts.

Your writing does not create confusion, our emotions does that to us. Plus because of Arnav’s infidelity all his another actions how good his intentions might be seem too little (at least to me).

Originally posted by: VeiledWords

I totally understand the disdain for Arnav’s character. Trust me 😅😅😅 He is written in a way where he has hurt Khushi, there are no doubts about that.

I still wouldn’t compare him to Shyam.

Shyam’s wife wouldn’t endure this much pain, she will have to give up her LIFE because her husband refused to step up to his mother. It clearly states that doctors were telling there were complications and his mother chose to call a midwife for delivery.

Now Arnav of this story could be a lot of things, but I don’t have an iota of doubt in my head that he would never let anyone force Khushi into a situation like this. He ran to save her from her family when he heard of Shyam Jha.

Even when he didn’t have a lot of money, Khushi’s treatment and dabba service had his immediate support. And Shyam was a damned banker in a city. Clearly more well off than Arnav and still pushed his wife to death. I have no idea what to call him if not a monster.

He didn’t mind manhandling Khushi while his daughter was a feet away. All because he couldn’t take the rejection of Khushi pulling her hand away from him. This much entitlement when he wasn’t even married to her. I don’t put his character above forcing himself on her.

Here I may differ from a lot of people in the comment section, but I will take someone over Arnav than Shyam at any given day. Yes, Arnav had hurt Khushi in the sense that would crush her, but he will NEVER, EVER stoop to the level of SMJ of this story. Because if cheating from a husband who is still taking care of her from afar had done this to her mental state, I don’t even want to think what it would do to her to have a husband who has no regards for her life or consent when it comes to intimacy.

Again about Arnav’s role in Khushi’s suffering - he is aware. The ff cjeariy said that his anger that was bouncing around on everyone for hurting Khushi ended up ponting at himself. The good thing is, he can step aside his own emotions and go to Khushi when her family was about to sacrifice her in the name of societal pressure.

I was about to write this exact same thing. Shyam's wife lost her life because not only he didn't step up to his mom but he didn't feel ther was anything wrong either afterwards

Arnav has hurt Khushi emotionally undoubtedly. No excuses there. But shyam would have hurt her both physically as well as emotionally. He is not beyond doing marital r*pe to get what he wants.

I would say Khushi is better off with neither but if it's a choice between them both then Arnav is hands down better.

Originally posted by: tashi26

the last two photographs on the balcony were the ones which Arnav, Aman were taking care of. God reading about them made me just sick 🤢. Even if Arnav comes out to be the bechara here, I have no forgiveness for him. Nobody can erase that image from Khushi’s eyes ever. No wonder she is so shattered.

Rest of the photographs we need to wait for Arpita to disclose, because they seem to be as everything that happened was properly planned. The mighty ASR might have played into an obsessed but a very good actresses hands.

Still they could be the complete truth, we will come to know soon.

But one thing is for sure, whoever sent them to khushi had personal reasons. Addressing the envelope as just ‘Khushi’.

Somebody mentioned Arpita once denied in her comment Lavanya or Manali disclosing about the affair to khushi as it was professional suicide. Only that’s why I am confused of who could it be.

I feel it's Aman. He couldn't go openly against Arnav but he didn't want Khushi to stay in the sham of marriage may be

Or it could be lavanya as she was worried Arnav might change his mind about divorce and wanted to make sure seperation happens at any cost.manali might be unaware

Arpita, i believe you have a soft corner for Arnav.You always tries to justify him. You want to make his caring attitude magnificent to his infidelity. If you think shyam monster, I will call arnav something worse( do tell a worse adjective)

And if I had to choose, it will be neither shyam nor Arnav.(May be shyam.Atleast l know what I am entering into with shyam.There will be both emotional and physical damage but here emotional damage will be less comparing Arnav's scenario).It is 21st century.Lol! And at this point khushi's intimacy with Arnav who had lavanya looks brutal than going through it with any stranger.

In Pandora's box khushi had no 3rd choice because it was 1900s.She had to choose from Arnav and shyam.She choose Arnav.(Better of the 2devils)

About shyam's wife, i remember shyam replying to khushi's question that his wife also wanted home delivery.(preferably Flipkart 😅 kidding)

If shyam mishandling khushi makes him worst monster,then I should have stopped watching ipkknd when Arnav of ipkknd did the same.But teenager me didn't realise it , later,adult me ignored it

Originally posted by: Ashviniv

I feel it's Aman. He couldn't go openly against Arnav but he didn't want Khushi to stay in the sham of marriage may be

Or it could be lavanya as she was worried Arnav might change his mind about divorce and wanted to make sure seperation happens at any cost.manali might be unaware

I thought of aman's possibility too...but no guys, i don't think he would do that, given his commitment towards arnav and remember even he was wondering why khushi looked so devastated when she entered the penthouse, also he kept mum when khushi asked about the divorce, it was khushi who just understood his silence.

Also if he wanted to do that, he would have done before not this cruelly on her anniversary day given the fact that he considers her like a sister, also when he knows the divorce is already on and arnav is going to talk to her the next day.

I doubt it’s Aman, he knew Arnav was going to tell her about Lavanya himself.

Originally posted by: tashi26

writerji, please it’s a request don’t reduce the length of the chapters, that might break the continuity. And I love reading loonggg chapters.

Now we do say things like that because we really get carried away by the emotions. Honestly, the story how its able to do it, I am not sure but it is so well written that it’s forcing many of us to just say what we want. And we kind of times don’t have the emotional strength to read previous chapters.

Also, for me the main problem with Arnav going to Umanagar and bringing Khushi back was he did not ask her whether she wanted to come back or not. Of course I understand he might realise the dangers of panchayat more but Khushi deserved to be asked. I know he had mused that if there was something wrong in the alliance even Khushi will not be able to stop him.

Also, Arnav is a practical man, if Khushi wants that divorce he will give it to her. Call me sadist but I really want him to beg her for her forgiveness. He did that in ch 9 but I want him to do more. Those are my only thoughts.

Your writing does not create confusion, our emotions does that to us. Plus because of Arnav’s infidelity all his another actions how good his intentions might be seem too little (at least to me).

Arpita, you are really scaring me about the next chapter now. Is this Arnav Lavanya saga really going to be that difficult to read? We all know he had cheated.

Originally posted by: VeiledWords

Tashi, as I said to Ashvini, this is my exact doubt. Are longer chapters creating this confusion?? I know the continuity will take a hit and I don’t expect people to go back to older chapters, but would it be easy to hold on to small details if the chapters itself isn’t very complex?

No u will loose the essence if u cut short the chapters I feel. It's us who need to take each chapter as a whole rather than getting ahead of overselves