You are making me cry since the day I started reading the story. 'Cheating' is a topic that triggers the worsssttt in me always, why? I have never understood honestly, I always wonder why this topic triggers me to this extent and feels so extremely personally. I remember crying my eyes out while watching the particular confrontation scene between kashi and bajirao in bajirao mastani.
I have found your, this story 3 days after you posted and will you believe me if I say, I have cried my eyes out for Khushi and constantly feeling this hollowness in my heart and gut since then (even now when I am writing this) and checking if you have updated almost 10 times a day probably. I literally shiver everytime I am reading your update in anticipation or what I don't know.
I wish I had found your story after you had completed the whole story, because this waiting and anticipation of what is going to happen next is honestly getting on my nerves, because you know, like read the whole thing at once and get it off from your system, but this anticipation is pure torture.
My heart, OH MY GOD, my heart is legit bleeding for this khushi- so innocent, so pure, so giving...I can't understand how could arnav do this to her, he could have divorced her and than could have gone for an affair with that idiotic women. I wish you make your arnav regret and suffer like hell, and let's not even talk about that woman.
The diehard arshi fan in me wants you to make them unite at the end and give us a happy ending, BUT the women in me cannot accept, khushi accepting arnav again in her life after he went on to the 'other woman's bed' leaving his wife. I don't know how you are going to unfold the story but i wish that by somehow, someway, you make us and your Khushi forgive Arnav and unite them at the end, ( i know i am sounding ridiculous) but i just want their love to win at the end. I just want that 19 and 24 year old arshi to win at the end.
Does arnav love lavanya? Like what do you wanted to convey when you wrote "presumed lover" in you first chapter? I have read and re-read all the chapters and I want to write so much on them and also want to urdestand so much from you and your pov, but I have already written too much for now and may be you will get tired while reading the whole thing. LOL. But guess i just needed to get all of this out of my system. ( an extremely emotional human being).
LASTLY, a kind request, please give frequent updates or even better update the whole story at once (lol just kidding) my anxiousness and emotions are at its peak with this story. And yes, you are an EXTREMELY FANTASTIC writer my dear. Keep up the good work. I have read "Darmiyaa" also 3days ago and cried half of the night but as I read the finished story so it was a little less of a torcher in comparison to this one.
Best of luck. (and sorry for blabbering so much).
Edited by Pujakrishna - 2 years ago
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