ArShi FF~Dawn Noon and Dusk~Note of page 86 and 87

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suji5

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Posted: 6 years ago

#551

Arnav and khushi just started their journey and there was a lot hurdles before them

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Aaradhaya1688

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Posted: 6 years ago

#552

i am loving reading this again

thanks for the pm

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Ms.Lizzie

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Posted: 6 years ago

#553

PROLOGUE

Beautifully portrayed the mother's turmoil. After reading the note I realised the mother might or might not be Khushi. That makes it more interesting. Waiting for the plot to unfold.

P.S. I am going to read and comment part by part I hope it ok.

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Ms.Lizzie

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Posted: 6 years ago

#554

CHAPTER 1

The friendship is cute. Young and hopeful and full of life wow what a bliss.

There enters the hero to save Khushi from the monster (in her words)

Waiting to see how equation between arnav and Khushi is going to be

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Ms.Lizzie

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Posted: 6 years ago

#555

CHAPTER 2

I can already sense that Arnav is going to give hard time to everyone around him with his thick head.

Akash is fun and sweet and going to make Payal's life interesting.

Is it possible that Payal is the kid from prologue?

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Arnav_Khushifan

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Posted: 6 years ago

#556

Hi Sandhya
I want to thank you for sharing your story with us. I am hooked to this one. It us so beautifully written and I am loving the fact that both Khushi and Anjali are such strong women in your story! Looking forward to the next chapter! If you decide to move this to your blog please send me a link to that! My email is rochaney65@gmail.com
I would really appreciate that! I am a sucker for Arshi!s stories. Once again thank you! You have no idea how much happiness you are giving to all of the Arshi fans!

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sugar_bag

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Posted: 6 years ago

#557

Loved the fact that Khushi maintained her stand. Arnav was quick on realization. Nice update

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D_Desi_Dil

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Posted: 6 years ago

#558

Oh the heartbreak !😭

Very emotional but self preservation is also necessary.

Glad that at least he acknowledged his wrong deed and apologised. Maybe it won't hurt this bad when they meet again.

So that was the end of phase one, expecting something cheerful and loveable update next, most probably the much awaited leap after the gloomy and tearful goodbyes.

I hope their reunion will be better than their separation and make me feel as good as I am feeling sad now.

The depth of emotions you are making me feel is overwhelming, as I have known myself to be not on the sides of emotional people.😔

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Ms.Lizzie

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Posted: 6 years ago

#559

CHAPTER 3

He was extremely rude. Sweet of her to forgive him

Beginning of sweet friendship

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GuruDeep246

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Posted: 6 years ago

#560

Is there a leap now? Or do they move on from each other's absence? Or still they are in the same boat where they separated? When will be Payal's entry? So many questions arising in my mind 😳😲