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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
awesome starting yar
so arnav and sheetal are together in this game...
one wants the company and arnav wants khushi it seems...without knowing khushi both are planning this...but when he gets into it he will be tangled very much...

Ayushi!! I so appreciate your support for my work! Really means a lot that you invest your time in my FFs be it on ArShi or Adiya! Can't thank you enough for it 😊

Your last line surmises it perfectly. ;)

Edited by ErisedWitch45 - 7 years ago

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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: sanoniti
nice start.continue soon.

Hi! Thanks so much for reading this fic too!

(So glad to see you here) 😊

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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: coderlady
Khushi should go open another company and build that up.

1stly thanks so much for taking time out for this fic! (Loved your feedback in the girl and the ghost)! 😊

Payal says that too but for Khushi, Magnolia is something she has build from scratch. There's a lot of sentiment attached... Let's see what happens in the future ;)

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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: akhi123
Awesome

Thanks a ton! Glad you enjoyed it 😊

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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: jyothirockz
Beautiful beginning...
So, this story begins with War between Sheetal and Khushi, that somehow turn into a battle between Khushi and Arnav because Sheetal decides to play dirty. Khushi seems strong principled and determined person.
By the way I loved Payal's analogy regarding Sheetal and her issues with Khushi.

Thanks a lot for investing your time in my new fic, Jyothi! 😊

Your review is on point. It's starting off as war b/w Sheetal and Khushi but will it become a war b/w Arshi or will fate have some other plans :D

Thanks for liking the analogy and understanding Khushi's character so well. :)

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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Doc-ere
It's seems interesting... Looking forward for next update.

Thanks a lot! (happy to see you here!) 😊

I'll be putting up the next part soon

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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: ssdewi83
love it..new angle story..what date give them answer...

Thanks a ton! 😊

Pleased to know that you liked it.

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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: DMGFan-2b-not2b
Great start! Sounds v interesting, looking forward to the updates...

Thanks so much! (And glad to see you're reading this fic too) 😊

Will be updating soon :)

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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: anjs
interesting story... wish Arnav had over heard how much Magnolia means to Khushi... hopefully he will know soon and take it over, just to gift it to Khushi

Thank you so much! 😊

I really like your last line :D Let's see what lies ahead for them ;)