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Uzii

@Uzii

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Why arnav is like this so reserved even with his family members i think some tragedy happened which changed him so drastically but khusi is total opposite n that definitely attracts so it would be fun when she will enter in his life n will turn it upside down with her craziness n vibrant personality.

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ILoveFF

@ILoveFF

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Hi Readers,

It has been brought to my notice that my chapters are quite long. As of now they vary between 1200+ to 1500+ words. I was told that 4 chapters could have been 6-7 chapters.

If you feel they are very long, I will try to bring them to less than 1000.

Thank you for your suggestions. It is really helping me shape myself better.

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mayabhi

@mayabhi

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Nice chapter.. So arnav is running away from something. But his family seems quite nice. Curious to know more abt arnav.

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mayabhi

@mayabhi

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: ILoveFF
Hi Readers,

It has been brought to my notice that my chapters are quite long. As of now they vary between 1200+ to 1500+ words. I was told that 4 chapters could have been 6-7 chapters.

If you feel they are very long, I will try to bring them to less than 1000.

Thank you for your suggestions. It is really helping me shape myself better.

I dont feel the chapters r too long honestly. Write as u feel comfortable.

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coderlady

@coderlady

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Something tells me Arnav did not let work go by the wayside when he was away. Something must be wrong and he doesn't want that partnership. Of course its frustrating for the family since he refuses to talk.

PS. the length of chapters does not bother me. Do what works for you.

Edited by coderlady - 7 years ago