ARHI SS: Revival (Chapter 9 posted 08/07!)

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Srivalli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#171

Awesome story!!

Loved it.

Enjoyed reading this.

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

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MUNUDAS

@MUNUDAS

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Posted: 8 years ago

#172

One of the best updates of this story.loved it so much.arnav's honest confession touched my heart.poor guy...he doesn't want to act overprotective nor he wants to be a jealous and insecure hubby,but still can't help it.its his love for her that makes him insecure.he had lost her once but doesn't want to lose her again.loved khushi's maturity.the way she is trying to make him understand the situation is great.hope they continue to support each other and give each other the space they deserve.eagerly waiting for the next update.

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Love.life2

@Love.life2

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Posted: 8 years ago

#173

Brilliant writing.

I loved the concept and the narration.

Arnav did want to come back but it was too late but better late than never.

I have a question which harsh embrace were you referring in the last update when Khushi felt the past was repeating.

When did Arnav embrace her harshly?

Also what did he tell his family where he is at?

Btw I just had different take on remarriage on the show because they were legally married. Arnav was doing it only for Khushi's happiness so why would anyone accuse her of anything when Nani and Anjali themselves let him Live with La without marriage.

So hope you address this aspect in this story as the main reason Khushi went away is the babies. Whenever the families meet when they do see the babies the issue would still arise.

Eagerly waiting to see the story unfold.