Arshi TS: Predestination; Note & Last part- Page 21; 29th Aug

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Uarnkhui

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Amazing update thank for pm

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chinnulu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Loved the OS

Poor girl, faced heart break, cheating boyfriend, unhappy with her job. Khushi is really crazy girl who blabbered all her problems to a stranger. Arnav calmly listened everything Khushi had to say.

Thanks for the PM

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sonali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

so beautifully written.. obviously loved it. yeh bhi koi puchane ki baat hai..

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WanieA

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Pitty khushi..bad payal. Atleast as best fren she should hv inform..take it or leave it its up to khushi..hmmm.asumming is a very bad word in frenship.vihaan dick head..sorry..sad its just os..hmmun unless u pitty us n decided to write ts for this story..hehehehe..superb yaar. Thank u for sharing

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Shalini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: ArshiS.Raizada
Really a lovely shot, well written
good work👏

Thanks Pari. Am glad to make you smile!

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Shalini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: bubulswt
superb os loved it
but I must say if you have friends like Payal then you
don't need a enemy she should have told khushi about Vihaan
Lift part was super cute

Bulbul dear... I agree with you! Glad you liked the lift encounter 😉

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Shalini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: WanieA
Pitty khushi..bad payal. Atleast as best fren she should hv inform..take it or leave it its up to khushi..hmmm.asumming is a very bad word in frenship.vihaan dick head..sorry..sad its just os..hmmun unless u pitty us n decided to write ts for this story..hehehehe..superb yaar. Thank u for sharing

Wanie!! So nice to hear from you 😊

Will think about continuing it in future. I dont think this story (if developed) could be contained within 1-2 shots though. It will definitely convert into a SS and not sure if we have enough time right now... if you know what I mean 😉

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Shalini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Sonalikarhi
so beautifully written.. obviously loved it. yeh bhi koi puchane ki baat hai..

Sonaaali!! How are you doing dear? Long time, right? 😉

Puchne pe encouragement milta hai na.. you know 😆

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Shalini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: brishti84
Omg that rambling is SO Khushi. I miss her 😭 I have full confidence that Arnav will figure out the connection since she mentioned Payal and go after her. Your OS warning at the end is great. You know your readers too well 😆 Lovely.

Brishti, you are back! Hurray 😆

I thought she would spill out some more... but then the lift had already arrived 😛

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Shalini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: poojasidd123
What a lovely shot. Arshi's meeting happened at the right moment and you created it beautifully. I'm sure they will have a chance to know each other again.