Arshi TS: Predestination; Note & Last part- Page 21; 29th Aug

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Shalini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: sb1234
This was excellent!!!! I love the whole blabbering in front of a stranger:)
Just a thought why don't u make a full blown FF of this ?? I would love to know what happens next :)

Hi there! You know, I kinda wait for your comment... hehe. Bet you didnt know that! 😉

Could plan to continue this in the future dear... depends on time and you know... other continuing stories

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Shalini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Aishu136
No nahi illa ledhu...
U did not end there!
Its such a lovely start, my god! The pace, the entry and the way it is expressed👏 everything has been going good and you had to end it there saying it just a one-shot
How could you? like really how could you?
How could you be so cruelll????
No i highly contempt this and i demand the next shot immediately

Hey Devi Maiya... itna gussa!

You know Aishu, I could very well give a next shot.. but that still wont calm our hearts. Such is our love for Arshi and everything related to the IPK duniya 😆

So anyway, so sweet of you to comment. I learnt so many ways to say 'No'... Guess where would I use it! 😉

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Shalini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Nilpori
Oh God!!! How cab this be a one Shot..No Freakin Way...

Hi Nil, so long!

Okay, so lets hear from you... How many shots do you think this should be? 😉

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Shalini

@TwisterGirl

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Sharaa
Nice OS...
This one deserves a second part with Arshi romance...
Poor Khushi,felt cheated & played along...

Hoping for next part😃

Hey Jay. So nice to hear from you. Will think about a next part... but again that would not leave us happy and satisfied, you know

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Shalini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: peachygirl
Best friends' betrayal hurts more than boyfriends'!
Felt bad for khushi for having a friend like payal:/ And her asshole of a boyfriend.. Ughhh!!!
Arnav-khushi encounter was so darn cute! Loved the story:))

Hey dear... where did such a philosophical thought come.. hmm? Glad you liked the story!

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Aishu

@Aishu136

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: TwisterGirl

Hey Devi Maiya... itna gussa!
You know Aishu, I could very well give a next shot.. but that still wont calm our hearts. Such is our love for Arshi and everything related to the IPK duniya 😆

So anyway, so sweet of you to comment. I learnt so many ways to say 'No'... Guess where would I use it! 😉

Gussa nahi, just tried to be like our own sanka devi for once to get the next shot!!

You are absolutely right, we would never be satisfied as a arshi fan with how many ever shots you come up with:)

But only few shots you feel it to be cute and it meant to be short!!

Few we would want the story to continue because it just not only wish of the readers but also the story has such potential and it deserve it to be a long one!!

I highly feel this story is one such deserving one!!!:))))

So babyyy, come up with the next shot know, see its not only me who feels so but all others too!!

So a very humble request from an adrenaline fan, to continue this story by giving atleast one more shot!!!!

Please Pretty pleaseee:)))))

I wonder what more to say...

Lemme think and get backkk

Edited by Aishu136 - 8 years ago