Arshi TS: Predestination; Note & Last part- Page 21; 29th Aug - Page 14

Originally posted by: LuvAmalfi

Nice story . U write well. I still do feel arnav was insensitive to her. Not shreya or Sarita. He actually almost taunts her and says that Vihaan is happy with the beautiful La ..and he looks at her a certain way ... no one needs to hear that .. not escpicially a person that's going thru heartbreak. . Her being sad is not for a reason doesn't require a slap to pull her out of .. she had been thru heartbreak .. from her bestie and fianc.. her friends shouldn't decide if it's time for her to stop ranting and move on .. she's been the one thru heartbreak .. she should decide .. there's no fast track .. Also , sometimes , to move on , one doesn't need to get back to being all friendly with people that cheated ..it's ok to leave a few relations ..especially when trust is broken.. but I get it that forgiving is good here like khushi did.. but she need not be sorry for her state of being ..

Lovely ending 😊

Originally posted by: Arilip

My feelings are same...nobody needs slap to come out of heartbreak specially when they were cheated and not in fault ...I agree that a friend needs to tell the truth and not pleasing things but they very we'll can tell her to move on be mature and forget these things I don't know why khushi would want that jerk back in her life... I don't understand why it's still khushi's misery!!!!!! All she needed to know that vihan is a third grade looser who didn't deserve her...not 'sorry to burst your bubble. but lavanya is really nice and beautiful girl and vihan really loves her' 😕😕

Also she attended vihaans marriage it's good but why she felt like she has some shortcomings?????? If that jerk liked someone else it's not HER FAULT!!!!!!!! why she has to bridge the gap...

Payal did redeem herself to some extent and I take lavanya too as a good person...

Anyway I hope now Arnav will be the partner she deserves...

Originally posted by: tuli_jayee

Though I didn't plan on writing any note further , but I thought of writing few things. How many of us have truly able to move on after our break up. Inspite of being hurt, do all of our heart agreed to our brain ? When our brain screamed 'he is jerk, forget him , you are better off without him', don't our heart said softly ,'was it my mistake ? Was I not enough ? Why did it go wrong'? Don't we all have this lingering hope that 'he will realise his mistake & come back to me'. Don't we have thousand sceneries running into our mind that - how he will repeatedly apologize & how we will act pricey before taking him back again. Do our heart really follow logic?

So sometimes rude awakening was required to get us out of that hopeless hope - that things are not going back to be normal. But then again , inspite of the words, they didn't left her alone. They were with her till the end .

Different people have different coping mechanism . You might not agree with me - & I truly understand your opinions. But things like this have really worked for peoples , who were much more miserable than Khushi. & I can say it from my personal experience. & the men or women in question have become stronger with time . While the people who were at fault, their karma did bite them.

J

Originally posted by: Arilip

Thanks for replying to my comment

Probably you are right in your opinion but I would not like her to have any hopes of rekindling relationship with such jerk...of course she would like him to come back and apologise and act pricey ...

And about "do all of our heart agreed to our brain ? When our brain screamed 'he is jerk, forget him , you are better off without him', don't our heart said softly ,'was it my mistake ? Was I not enough ? Why did it go wrong'? Don't we all have this lingering hope that 'he will realise his mistake & come back to me'. Don't we have thousand sceneries running into our mind that - how he will repeatedly apologize & how we will act pricey before taking him back again. Do our heart really follow logic?"

That's where her friends support was actually needed to say it wasn't your fault That he was a jerk she but Arnav did just the opposite by saying what he said ...she needed friends to boost her confidence ... that's why I said they have been insensitive , I have never said they were bad friends ...khushi was lucky to have them who loved her genuinely .

But in the end it's your story your characters to behave as you want them😉😉 but it's our right to express our feelings through comments😃😃 anyway I don't go n comment until I really get attached ...and its your writing I am always attached⭐️👏