Arshi TS: Predestination; Note & Last part- Page 21; 29th Aug

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Lily30

@Lily30

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Love the os 👏
Khushi on a verbal roll.
Thank you for the pm 😃

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Lovelyday

@Lovelyday

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Lovely !!! Please think about continuing this

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Aishu

@Aishu136

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

No nahi illa ledhu...

U did not end there!

Its such a lovely start, my god! The pace, the entry and the way it is expressed👏 everything has been going good and you had to end it there saying it just a one-shot

How could you? like really how could you?

How could you be so cruelll????

No i highly contempt this and i demand the next shot immediately

Edited by Aishu136 - 8 years ago

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Nilpori

@Nilpori

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Oh God!!! How cab this be a one Shot..No Freakin Way...

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

I just can't believe that this is a one shot - definitely you should continue- please please
Lovely start

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amadea

@amadea

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

well written .please continue soon

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Brishti

@brishti84

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Omg that rambling is SO Khushi. I miss her 😭 I have full confidence that Arnav will figure out the connection since she mentioned Payal and go after her. Your OS warning at the end is great. You know your readers too well 😆 Lovely.

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Pooja

@poojasidd123

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

What a lovely shot. Arshi's meeting happened at the right moment and you created it beautifully. I'm sure they will have a chance to know each other again.

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Pooja

@poojasidd123

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

I'm looking forward for more stories from you.

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sb1234

@sb1234

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

This was excellent!!!! I love the whole blabbering in front of a stranger:)
Just a thought why don't u make a full blown FF of this ?? I would love to know what happens next :)

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