A Summer's Day l ArHi Drabble - Page 2

Originally posted by: Ssanjinika

Your words have painted a picture so iridescent and vivid that I feel bereft at not being able to walk into the scene and finding out the story behind the picture. To think that you strung this together with random words is so wonderful. Dare I hope there is a continuation?

~Sandya

Brilliantly written piece, loved it 👏
Very emotional and intense, can picture the scenery due to the vivid description.

Wow. Khushi's pain and thoughs seemed like a canvas of words here which you painted so beautifully.

Originally posted by: Lily30

Brilliantly written piece, loved it 👏
Very emotional and intense, can picture the scenery due to the vivid description.

very poetic and quite painful

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

very poetic and quite painful

brilliant piece of writing

you should write more

How smoothly you have made Khushi and her feelings blend in with nature and the oneness in living beings - a mother is a mother for any living being!

Originally posted by: cocoamob

How smoothly you have made Khushi and her feelings blend in with nature and the oneness in living beings - a mother is a mother for any living being!

Beautiful!!