SS: Broken Strings SEASON 2 *Epilogue on page 30* - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Loved the first part of season 2👏
Poor Yara and Kiara😭
Advay is punishing the wrong people in his grief😡
Eager for the next part.
Thank you for the pm😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Nice update.
Advay doesn't care about Yara and Kiara.
Continue soon. Eagerly waiting to read how the story proceeds.
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Needs a lot of work to be done on this ASR... Kiara has her hands full!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
i don't get it how can someone be so selfish just bcoz they love someone others love hold no value to them
Advay is such a fool in misery he is gifting it to others too
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Oh.. Felt like after so long...
Hope Advay could get atleast cordial with kiara..
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 2

Giving an excuse of Advay's busy schedule to dadi and dadu, Kiara sat inside the car with Yara hopping on her lap. Looking at Peter she asked, "He isn't really busy, right?" Peter looked at embarrassed not knowing what to say. "Wo...he..." he stammered when she said, "Drive Peter"

Peter sighed and started the car. "Where is Ian bhaiyya?" Yara asked cutely and Peter said, "Ian bhaiyya is having his football practise."

"Mamma, do you know what happened today at school?" Yara asked. Kiara nodded no and Yara said, "Today I took kheer to school na? All my friends were asking for that!"

"Did you give them?" Kiara asked.

"No, I shouted at them!" Yara said.

"Why? You should have shared it with them Yara" Peter said. Kiara nodded and asked, "Why did you shout at them?"

Yara looked at Kiara and Peter and then said, "One day when I asked papa to share his pasta, he shouted at me. So today when my friends asked to share, I shouted at them. Did I do wrong?"

Kiara and Peter were silent for a moment. "Bolo na mamma, did I do wrong?" Yara asked again.

"Yes, you did wrong!" Kiara said, "You should share things with each other. Doesn't Ian bhaiyya share his chocolates and toys with you?" Yara nodded her head vigorously.

"Ha...you should share things with your friends just like you share things with your bhaiyya. Never shout at anyone. That's a bad habit!" Kiara said calmly.

"But why do papa shout at everyone?" Yara asked.

"That is because papa is really stressed. He has great works at office na? So he is always worried about that. That is why he shouts!" Kiara said.

"But he shouts at me only!" Yara said pouting her lips.

Kiara looked at Peter who looked at her not knowing the answer for her complaint. "Why does he shout at me mamma?" Kiara asked Yara asking and she suddenly diverted the topic to the ice-cream vendor of the street.

"What should I do?" Kiara asked as she sat beside Arnav and Khushi in his poolside.

Arnav sighed and said, "I don't know Kiara. I tried my best to remove his hatred towards Yara but..." he left his sentence incomplete and hung his head down.

"Yara is growing up. She is learning things from what happens around us. Today she denied to share her food with her friends and shouted at them because her father did that to her," Kiara said and continued with a sigh, "This should not happen anymore. If this continues, it'll create a great impact on her childhood!"

"Yara yearns for her father's love but this boy...I don't know what to do with him! He believes that Yara was the reason for Hanna's death." Khushi said, "Doctor had asked Hanna to abort her baby since it was a huge risk for her. She already had a miscarriage and her womb was not strong enough. Yet she refused to abort!"

"And Advay hates Yara because it was her whom Hanna chose over him!" Kiara said and Arnav nodded.

"Hanna doesn't deserve this. She believed that he would love Yara more than his own life but..." Arnav said, "She may not be happy watching what is happening here!"

"But no matter what papa, a father cannot hate his daughter. Advay may also love his daughter but is not showing it out. No one can hate Yara!" Kiara said.

"I don't know Kiara. I just hope things changes. I just hope you can change him!" He said looking at her.

Kiara sighed and Khushi said, "I chose you as his wife because you would be a great mother to Yara but also because you could change my son! You were the best thing that happened to him and this family. If you weren't there then we would have never got him back!"

Kiara nodded and said, "I'll try maa. But I cannot promise. I can promise that I'll be a great mother to Yara, but Advay...I don't know. I love him...I always loved him, but all he have for me is hatred!"

Khushi and Arnav looked at each other not knowing what to say.

"Mamma...Papa..."

Kiara was arranging her clothes in wardrobe, where she had acquired a little space for her clothes from Advay with the help of Khushi and Angel, when her daughter's sweet voice greeted her.

Advay was working on his laptop and looked up to see Yara, dressed in her pink nightwear, sprinting inside their room.

Yara jumped on the bed and started hopping on it shouting, "Today I'll sleep here!"

"Go to your room..." Advay said rudely. Kiara looked at him not liking his tone.

"Nahi...films main aise hi hota hai. (This is what happens in films) Ma, Papa aur beti sleeps together" She said pointing to Kiara, Advay and herself.

"Yara..." Kiara said softly, "Beta, go to your room. There you have your favourite teddy!"

"Nahi...I'll sleep here!" she cried stubbornly.

"Bas Yara. STOP IT!" Advay shouted.

Yara flinched at the tone and Kiara said covering up, "Yara, your papa is really busy and our voices are irritating him! Chalo, let's go!"

"Par mamma...I want to sleep with you both!" Yara said with her fallen face.

Kiara looked at Advay with pleading who looked at her in his annoyed expression. "If Yara wants to sleep with papa and mamma, then her wish is to be granted." Kiara said smiling and Advay looked at her angrily.

"YAYYY!" Yara cried happily and ran to Advay. Holding his hand, she dragged him to bed, "Chalo papa..."

Advay was about to shout when Kiara said intervening, "Advay, it's time to sleep. Tomorrow you have an early meeting right?" She closed his laptop and arranged his file.

Yara made him lie who did it reluctantly and she lied beside him. Kiara smiled and covered the father and daughter with a blanket. "Mamma, come..." Yara cried and Kiara said, "I have to change my clothes dear. I'll come now!"

Yara nodded her head and she hung on to Advay's t-shirt collar. Advay looked at her angrily. Yara was playing with his t-shirt and said in her cutest voice, "Papa, you love black colour?"

He kept mum and she asked again, "You love black, papa?" Again he didn't reply and she looked at him and saw his eyes closed. "You're asleep?" She asked. Again she got no reply. She sat up on the bed and kissed him on his cheek. "Good night papa" she whispered in her cute voice and then lied down with her head on his shoulder and hands on his chest. Slowly she also drifted into sleep.

Advay opened his eyes which he had closed to escape from her questionnaire and looked at his daughter who was sleeping hugging him. His mind went back to the moment before when she kissed his cheek whispering good night. He looked at her face.

Probably this was the first time he was seeing her face after her birth! She looks very beautiful. He wondered how he had missed her long nose which resembled her mother. He lifted his hand and pinched her soft cheeks. Yara shifted in her sleep and snuggled close to him. A faint smile appeared on his lips. He snaked his arm around his daughter's little form and pulled her closer hiding her in his arms. Closing his eyes, he slowly drifted into sleep.

Kiara stood near the bathroom door watching the scene with a smile.

"Why aren't you asleep?" Peter asked in his sleepy voice seeing Angel sitting on the bed.

"No...just worried about Kiara..." Angel said. Peter sat up on the bed and leaned to the headboard. "What happened?" he asked.

"I just hope Advay give her the love she deserves. She didn't have a good life. Days with Rudra were a nightmare for her. Life was never fair with that girl." she said, "She finds solace in Yara. But how long? How long can she live with Advay's hatred?"

Peter sighed and said, "Things will change. I'm sure! Advay is a very good person at heart. He cannot hate someone for no reason. He is just not able to accept anyone after Hanna!"

"And Yara..." Angel said.

"We all know about his mental state. He even went into a state of multiple personality when he saw Anita whom he thought as Hanna being raped in front of him. You know those days right? He again lost his wife and this time for eternity. It's hard Angel. He needs time to accept that Hanna's death was not because of Yara. In fact no one can be blamed. No mother will abort her first child. But it is taking him a lot of time to understand it!" Peter said.

"Yara loves him so much!" Angel said.

"Even he does! But he is not showing that!" Peter said. Angel sighed and hugged him sideways. Laying her head on his chest she whispered, "Hope everything turns out well!" "It will. I assure you!" He whispered kissing her hair.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
nice update.. felt good to see Advay so close to his daughter and finally giving in to his cute doll's antics and slept taking her in his arms.. loved the update..


thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Woww...sooperb story, loving advay, yaara n kiara relation. Its like arshi only
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Just saw this.. so touching.. Poor Yara.. she is an angel..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Loved part 2👏
Kiara trying to bring Advay close to Yara, hope she succeeds and also gets her happiness in return, eager for the next part.
Thank you for the pm😃

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