SS: Broken Strings SEASON 2 *Epilogue on page 30* - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
thannks dear
so u fit kiara in the story
lovely start
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting beginning of season 2, can't wait, thank you for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Interesting start and love the cs👏
Eager for season 2 😃
Thank you for the pm 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Here comes season 2 of amazing story.. Lovely prologue.. Felt bad for kiara.. But let's see what turn situations takes for her.. Looking forward to meet Yara.. Best wishes and happy writing Broken Strings Season 2 😃
Thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting prologue and cs
waiting for updates
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow!!! awesum prologue dear ..
i have read all ur stories.. long wait, shattered souls, payback n lastly broken strings..awesum portrayin yaar... d way u r pennin d stry ws so suprb...
First season of briken strings was so awesum 2 read..

and agn 2nd season u rckd dear...
advy n kaira got married.. may b arnv cud hv forced him...
hope advy s ok vid arshi...
omg!! hanna died...dat ws so sad...
yaara s deprivd of her parents love..
she had lost her father along vid d mothr..so enotional...
seems stry s gonna si emotional..
kaira n rudra separated...dat ws shckin.. omg!!! advy hates kaira..
while seeing d prologue i am feelin d condition of kaira as same as khusi's once...
so awesum prologue dear..
eagerly waitin 4 d further prts dear...
do continue...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
again Kaira is in pain
y her
n Advay what is his problem

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey , you said Yara' s age is 5 years...and its a five year leap... But Hanna had a miscarriage ...and after getting pregnant again and giving birth to Yara, it would be better if Yara' s age is 4years or leap is of 6years...

Anyway, looking forward to this journey...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome prologue...👏
eagerly awaiting the next update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry guys there was a small mistake. It's a 6 years leap not 5 years



Chapter 1

"Khushi...Khushi...KHUSHI!!!!!!!!!!!" Arnav shouted from the room.

"Kya hai?" Khushi asked annoyed as she entered the room.

"Tie?" He asked. She sighed and walked to the wardrobe. "Right in front of your Arnav ji, even then you cannot see!" Khushi said and took the tie from it. Walking to him, she tied it around his neck.

"You look so handsome, even in your 60s!" Khushi said while ruffling his grey hairs. "Khushi!" he whined, "I just combed it!"

She giggled and he said combing his hair, "Seriously, who is the child - Yara or you?" "Arnav ji!" she smacked his back.

"By the way where is my ladli Yara?" Arnav asked turning to her. "Your rajkumari is still sleeping!" Khushi said.

Arnav nodded and took his coat. Khushi helped him wear and she said as she was buttoning it, "I think yesterday night Kiara slept with Yara" "Why?" he asked.

"I saw her coming out of her room today morning!" Khushi said, "She was crying" she added.

"Advay..." Arnav muttered, "Surely he must have said something!"

"I'm worried Arnav ji. What if this doesn't turn out well? If..." Khushi began when Arnav said, "Yara needs a mother. Plus, she loves Kiara like anything. Who can be a better mother to her other than Kiara?"

"I know but Advay..." Khushi said, "He is so changed. Hanna's death changed him altogether!"

Arnav nodded and said, "I expected the change but...I didn't foresee that he would hate Yara too..."

Khushi sighed and said, "I don't what to do. Yara needs Kiara but Advay...he won't accept her. He cannot accept anyone in Hanna's place!"

"No one can take Hanna's place in this house! But no one can take Kiara's place in Yara's heart!" Arnav said and Khushi nodded saying, "Let's hope for the best!"

Advay came out of the washroom after having a bath. He wiped his head and then threw the towel to the recliner when he saw his clothes arranged on the bed.

He frowned and walked to it when he saw Kiara entering with a cup of tea. She placed the cup on the table and took the towel from the recliner.

"What the hell is this?" he asked angrily and she looked at him. "Err...I just arranged...your dress..."

"I have told you earlier and is again repeating; DON'T ACT AS MY WIFE!" He said angrily. "I'm your wife!" She said in her soft voice.

"LIKE HELL YOU ARE!" he shouted and grabbed her arms. She hissed in pain as he held her tight. "Now listen carefully, take care of Yara and my family members but STAY AWAY FROM ME. Did you get that?" she nodded in pain and he left her arms.

"And why the hell are you wearing it?" he asked angrily pointing towards the mangalsutra. "Wo...main..." she began when he ordered, "Take it off!"

She looked at him wide eyed. "Take it off. NOW!" he shouted.

She said angrily "Your Anjali bua asked me today morning where my mangalsutra was. I lied to her that I removed it while sleeping and she said sternly to me that I am not supposed to remove that. What should I do? Go and tell her that my so called husband doesn't want me to wear it?" he looked away angrily and then walked out of the room. She watched him going and a lone tear escaped her eye which she hurriedly wiped off.

"Mamma..."

Kiara laughed as she heard her daughter whining cutely. "Wake up baby!" She said tickling her tummy and Yara cried out, "Mamma...stop...tickly tickly..."

Kiara laughed and picked the chubby girl in her arms. "Yara wants to sleep" she whined and laid her head on Kiara's shoulder.

"And mamma wants Yara to brush her teeth, take a bath and wear her school uniform!" Kiara said making her sit on the bed.

"Yara wants to be at home" Yara said with pouted lips.

Kissing her cheek, Kiara said, "But Yara will learn a lot if she goes to school?"

"Please mamma, can I take a day off?" Yara asked cutely.

"Bunking classes are not good! Your Ian bhaiyya never bunks school." Kiara said narrowing her eyes.

"But mamma, I'm in UKG. Ian bhaiyya has more to study that's why he goes to school!" Yara said.

"Ian bhaiyya reached there because he went to nursery school. If you bunk classes, you'll always stay in UKG and all your friends will reach 1st std!" Kiara said.

"Haw...is it?" Yara asked with wide eyes. "Hmm" Kiara hummed nodding her head. "So Yara baby, will you go to school?"

"Ha..." Yara cried.

"So come on, first we'll brush our teeth!" Kiara said lifting her in her arms and walking to washroom.

"Here you go Kiara..." Angel cried giving her a box, "You're the best cook!" Kiara smiled and thanked her.

Everyone gave Kiara their gift after her first rasoi which was marvellous.

It was then Advay walked down the stairs. Arnav saw him and called, "Advay, come and have breakfast!"

"I have a meeting dad!" Advay said and began to walk away when Arnav said, "Meeting won't start until I reach there. Come and sit here!"

"Ha papa...mamma's food is goody goody!" Yara said cutely with her mouth and hands covered with kheer and Kiara trying hard to wipe the stains away.

Advay looked at Kiara and then said to Arnav and Khushi, "Bye dad, bye mom, bye everyone!"

"Bye papa..." Yara cried hoping that at least this time he would return the bye. But it was never returned.

"Didn't Advay come?" Dadi asked as Kiara walked into her house for phagpera rasam. Nodding her head in denial, Kiara said, "He has a meeting. He said he'll pick me in the evening."

Dadi smiled and Kiara ran to her dadu. "Dadu!" she cried and hugged him. "How is my darling?" her dadu asked caressing her hairs. She smiled and kissed his cheek.

"Kiara, come...I have made all your favourite dishes!" Dadi said and Kiara jumped like a child, "Thank you dadi, you're the best!" she cried.

"Dude, its 4!" Peter said as he smacked Advay on his back. "So?" Advay asked frowning.

"So?" Peter asked shocked, "Don't you remember, you have to pick Kiara from her home!"

"You dropped her right? So go and pick her up!" Advay said burying himself in work. "But I'm not her husband!" Peter said.

"Peter please...go!" Advay said.

"Then who will pick up Yara?" Peter asked, "Okay, I'll go and get Kiara. You go and get Yara. Is that okay?"

"Why can't you pick them both?" Advay asked annoyed.

"Now listen carefully," Peter said seriously, "Kiara is YOUR wife, not mine. Yara is YOUR daughter, not mine. These things are something that YOU should do. So you have no right to order me to do something which you should have done!"

Advay stared at him and said in anger, "Go and get Kiara & that girl from school!"

"Yara" Peter said.

"What?" Advay asked annoyed.

"That girl has a name - Yara" Peter said and walked away leaving an angry Advay who threw a flower vase to floor breaking it into pieces.


Edited by ArchanaSuresh17 - 9 years ago

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