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SaiSreePN

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

brilliant update simi now am looking forward how arnav is going mend their relationship...

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Dawn

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Posted: 9 years ago

#112

A fresh concept and very interesting . So far loving it

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Huleygirl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#113

Wow that was an amazing update

Always wanted to see a little bit of this Khushi

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Anu567

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Posted: 9 years ago

#114

Interesting Simi. Poor Khushi. Though you know, my heart bleeds for Arnav as well. Maligned and used to depending entirely on his judgement with little faith in anyone else, he is programmed to distrust...it is his trust issues that made him doubt Khushi. So yeah...this may have been a good way forward on the show as well...

Best,

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crazyji

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Posted: 9 years ago

#115

Awesome story...

Wish they would have taken ipk the same way instead of making khushi look like a fool...

What khushi did was right ..one need to stand for themself...

Hope the family and arnav realizes their mistake..

Wishing to read more..

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muffin1996

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Posted: 9 years ago

#116

OMG this is probably the strongest point made by khushi on this regard...make him die in guilt...gooo khushi!!!!! :P

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mssujeetha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#117

nice update. khushis response to arnav's question was perfect.

continue soon

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Savera84

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Posted: 9 years ago

#118

Shyams and Sheetals are only external.

I know they have the audacity to enter someone's life and try to snatch their happiness. But they got some internal help. Buaji in Shaym's case and Raizadas minus Arnav in Sheetal's case.

Payal and Khushi were never treated nor considered as part of that family. It just looked like Gupta sisters have joined Prakash brothers in serving the clan. Mami still insults Payal for no apparent reason and Di still thinks her Chote loves her more than his life.

So, in this messed up family, your Khushi is really a breath of fresh air. Keep it going girl.

Thoroughly enjoying.

Cheers...

Edited by Savera84 - 9 years ago

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amus5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#119

I truly applaud you👏 ... this is one scene of ipk that many writers have attempted but have not been able to give a proper closure to this situation (not even close) 👏

the wound seems to be very raw just beneath the scab and once the scab is removed the pain is unbearable

Edited by amus5 - 9 years ago