BOUND By BLACKMAIL BOUND By BLACKMAIL Blog Link - Page 21

Originally posted by: ..KittyKat..

I love the way you write. And I'm loving the story line too. What would happen to Khushi now? I hope she doesn't get pregnant. O_o

Originally posted by: BarunFan1212

Wow! a good loong update.Yes as usual☺️

Mu after mu after mu. Abhie aur bhi hain in my kitty😆

How come Tanu still believes in Shyam? She doesn't believe or disbelieve I don't even think Shyam has talked to her lately...But then she doesn't know the whole truth about the situation either.

Doesn't she see how he is lapping behind Kelly? No I don't think she has seen all that...and if he was with Kelly she just thought he was being friendly ...She did find strange that Khushi was not mad at the situation.

What about all the others? How can they still believe there is some thing between K& S? Kelly's friends knows and they told her also during the party to not do such behavior.

I thought listening to aru and Khushi's phone call he knows the truth abt Khushi's innocence.

But From last chapt and this chapter it's not the case. Definitely by now everybody knows that whatever was in that phone convo was not to clear Khushi's name...but more trouble...remember how upset Arnav was due to that.

Update soon! anxious to find out the explosive life changing event.Yeyy!

Originally posted by: Annasabu

Amazing update.
Only you can do this to me- cliffhanger.
Perfect ambience was set up,anticipating a union. mmm☺️ Haha! Yah I worked real hard with my imagination to bring them to that situation...had to stretch a bit.😳

BTW where is Syam babua? Shyam is go went GOAnwa with Kelly maim
Kelley ke saath Goa mein hide and seek khl raha hei kaa, ek number ki 420. Exactly who cares...he is out for now.

Update soon. Super update.Thanks Anna🤗
Love
Anna🤗

Originally posted by: MONAKARAN

HI again Ritu ! Sorry but I have to post again. I am reading everyone's comments about your characters and I am shocked by how some of the readers are perceiving them. Let me make one thing very clear - there is nothing wrong with your writing skills or how you describe your characters. They are simply perfect. Their characters are meant to be flawed. what you have portrayed is how their characters should react.

YOUR Arnav - a shakki person who understands the physical side of love, but not the emotional. Does not mean he doesn't feel it - he just doesn't understand or acknowledge it. He is a cool cat, always in control but now he finds khushi has made him "feel" things he does not want to feel. He desperately wants to ignore the unknown and stick with the known - the desire. Does not mean he is succeeding. If it was just the physical he wouldn't be so desperate to have khushi come to him herself. He is devious and manipulative enough to make it happen any which way. But he gets a kick out of knowing Khushi wants him too. His yearning for her is far above the physical and you have expressed it very well.

Your Khushi - she is a soft hearted girl - private for a reason. She does not like show downs. likes to keep things personal and simple. Not one to be dramatic or wanting the limelight.

Your characters are yours - don't change anything - let things flow thru as you feel it. otherwise you will lose the essence of the story. what you have is perfect! if people can't feel that when reading your story then there is something lacking in them. I feel every bit of emotion you intended to come thru - which is what makes this story so special.catering to someone else's thoughts will ruin yours. this is a work of art and should stay yours thru and thru!

PS -I usually don't give such passionate comments to all my writers - in fact, I hardly ever comment - only when I find a story that touches me the way yours has.

Love your work!

Ritu

Originally posted by: CRAZY4_SARUN

awesome udate Thanks dear.
agraaahh arnav
again he misunderstood khushi
he just came into a conclusion that
Khushi might be with shyam
awesome khushi threw ring
n creep shyam face

Originally posted by: hararnav

Wats wrong with tanu... Wish after seeing khushi in that state she tried to find out wats bothering her... Well Tanu just thought it was stomach flu and when she didn't see Shyam there, she simply thought that he stayed back with Khushi...which fiance would leave their sick finace to go gallivanting😆.

Amongst the romantic night can't help but worry for khushi... She will be totally shattered wen she understand wat arnav was really meaning... I so want u guys to see how it would unfold

Originally posted by: chinnulu

Wonderful long update

Loved it

Sometime wondering why Tanu is so dumb and feel like she is making Khushi's life more tangled. Agree Khushi never opened up about her relationship with Shyam, is she so blind that she is not able to see how Khushi is behaving with Shyam and he with her. Shyam is avoiding Khushi but putting up show infront of Tanu, Arnav and her friends some times but most of the times he is spending with Kelly even a blind person will be able to see that but Tanu is so absorbed in her own happy bubble dreaming her life with Sid and not seeing what is going on infront of her own eyes. Khushi was dreaming about Arnav thinking she hurt him and wanted to break her engagement with Shyam immediately and not even wait till she goes to Nainital and inform her mamaji and family as she decided earlier thinking that Arnav is also in love with her which is why he is disturbed seeing the ring on her finger. Arnav is keeping his word not to talk with her directly but will ask Khushi indirectly whether she missed him. What an attitude. Arnav is so pissed off knowing that everyone along with Khushi are going to Mysore and will be back the next day. Khushi was so desperate to talk to Arnav about her not wanting to go to Mysore but both Arnav and Khushi had missed each other while they were searching for the other. Arnav immediately concluded she must have been with Shyam. Way to go. Where his harvard brain goes? Thinking he just knows how to do business outside it his brain goes dead and it sure works in wrong direction. When Khushi had clearly told him that she got engaged to Shyam in unavoidable situation and is not love with him or not even like him how can he come to such conclusion and think bad about her character. Poor she is building her dreams thinking about her prince who comes to her rescue and sweep off her feet. She will be heartbroken when she comes to know his real feelings at present which he has nothing but lust, desire and passion for her though deep down his heart knows what he exactly feels for her and he doesn't want to accept it.

Shyam is so disgusting, still he thinks Khushi has come to him seeing his personalities and instead of fearing of getting caught he turns the table on Khushi and manhandles her when she threw the engagement ring calling of their engagement. Never liked when you let him do that to Khushi. You should have showed that Khushi throwing up on his face and kicking him where it hurts the most. Shyam deserves atleast that from Khushi for hurting and forcing her into getting engaged to him. Even Kelly doesn't feel guilty when she saw Khushi standing infront of them instead she just went away and banged the door as if it is Khushi's fault for disturbing them.

Some how Khushi convinced Tanu of her not coming with them to the Trip and she wanted to surprise Arnav by planning something romantic for them which is why she asked Tanu when Arnav speaks to her not to let him know about her staying back. But that had backfired because Tanu thinks that both Khushi and Shyam stayed back to spend time together and started to tease her. Khushi is waiting for Tanu to come back to let her know the reality about her engagement. Hoping atleast after knowing what all the troubles Khushi had to go thru she will stop bothering her and sipport her. Wondering where did Kelly go. Wasn't it was Kelly's plan to go to Goa directly and not join them and asked Shyam what he intended to do.

Arnav is all prepared and planned how to make Khushi stay with him by offering money, luxuries or seduce her. Khushi dressed herself to look beautiful for Arnav and let him know everything. There Arnav was so mad at her thinking that she is two timing with him and Shyam. Khushi already feel happy and thinks Arnav's home as hers too after she broke her engagement thinks everything will be alright now.

Arnav finally saw Khushi and happy that she stayed back for him. Loved their romantic moments though knew eventually Khushi will be heartbroken but these few moments was beautiful. Arnav thinks Khushi is confusing herself when she says she loves him but it was the other way around he is confused with his feelings but Khushi is clear what she feels for him and that is why she is not stoping Arnav even if he tries to cross all the limits where Khushi is very particular about thinking all should happen between a man and woman only after the marriage. Hope Arnav realise his mistake in hurting and misunderstanding poor soul and redemp himself.

Waiting for the next one to see whether Khushi's feelings for Arnav changes or not.

Thanks for the PM