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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MDTharun

Shyam is a sickening B******d . Very glad that khushi gave back his so called engagement ring ,Shyam's role in this story is finished for now... but she should have given it in front of all the friends .Khushi doesn't think like that...whatever she had with Shyam was her private matter. So that all of them know that slimy thing was posing himself like a gentleman . Tanu is quite irritating , she calls herself khushi's close friend yet doesn't find out the missing love between Shyam - Khushi . She irritates the hell out of us by mentioning Shyam jiju's😡 name in every available opportunity . Tanu is thinking that Shyam is spending time with khushi but looks like the scum has left to Goa with Kelly . ...In Tanu's defense, first of all hardly had time in her own engagement party to see, what everybody else was doing...and then I think she does think there is something missing in Khushi's and Shyam's relationship but she can't pinpoint it...Well she genuinely thought, Khushi and shyam wants to spend some time together...

Arnav is no less than Shyam , he too wants khushi's body .Not exactly...and I am really very disappointed in my writing...if I made it look like he wanted only her body...I wanted to make it clear that he want much more than her body...he is very confused about the extent of his feelings about her...but I have tried to show from time to time...from his reactions and thoughts...he can't get her out of his head...he craves for her...and not just physically...But then again...another failure on my part...I apologize again...Khushi is hopelessly dreaming about marriage and commitment from Arnav .Oh yah my sweet Khushi...she is such a simple sweet romantic girl. After the misunderstanding years back Arnav has only one intention , just possess khushi's body , if money is all she wants he is game . The only saving grace about Arnav is , he wants khushi all for himself even if she is a gold digger / two timing b***h .That he most certainly do...
Khushi is in a mess
What will happen now ? Arnav - Khushi alone in the bedroom with no one to disturb them Ahh! Whatever we all are thinking...is going to happen.😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shekha2012

This is ramanji you can't stop in a HOT spot like this

Sorry dear...It was not flowing with this part...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Anu567


Ritu my dear girl,

Thank you for the detailed thought with which you dissect every point. One of those incredible things about you as a writer. You are awesome, so just remember that! And no, you cannot disappoint even if you tried. I am proud of your growth as a writer and I am definitely leaving this story - one of my favourites on the forum right now, by the way - in your capable hands. I love those characters as much as you do! Kya boloon ab! 😆So let us see where the morrow takes them!
Thanks dear! It is an effort...I most certainly not an expert in put human emotions and the complexity of them in words. Sometime I can confuse people...
But I know where most of the reaction is coming from...
Whereas I know what is happening next and where these characters are going...readers are unaware of the fact and their thinking is based on from chapter to chapter and their own interpretation.
Thanks again...Hopefully I won't fail in delivering what I have promised with this story.

Hugs,

Anu

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Posted: 9 years ago
HI again Ritu ! Sorry but I have to post again. I am reading everyone's comments about your characters and I am shocked by how some of the readers are perceiving them. Let me make one thing very clear - there is nothing wrong with your writing skills or how you describe your characters. They are simply perfect. Their characters are meant to be flawed. what you have portrayed is how their characters should react.

YOUR Arnav - a shakki person who understands the physical side of love, but not the emotional. Does not mean he doesn't feel it - he just doesn't understand or acknowledge it. He is a cool cat, always in control but now he finds khushi has made him "feel" things he does not want to feel. He desperately wants to ignore the unknown and stick with the known - the desire. Does not mean he is succeeding. If it was just the physical he wouldn't be so desperate to have khushi come to him herself. He is devious and manipulative enough to make it happen any which way. But he gets a kick out of knowing Khushi wants him too. His yearning for her is far above the physical and you have expressed it very well.

Your Khushi - she is a soft hearted girl - private for a reason. She does not like show downs. likes to keep things personal and simple. Not one to be dramatic or wanting the limelight.

Your characters are yours - don't change anything - let things flow thru as you feel it. otherwise you will lose the essence of the story. what you have is perfect! if people can't feel that when reading your story then there is something lacking in them. I feel every bit of emotion you intended to come thru - which is what makes this story so special.catering to someone else's thoughts will ruin yours. this is a work of art and should stay yours thru and thru!

PS -I usually don't give such passionate comments to all my writers - in fact, I hardly ever comment - only when I find a story that touches me the way yours has.

Love your work!

Ritu
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Posted: 9 years ago

❤️❤️
Edited by MoonBow. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome work dear.now am eagerly waiting for the next part.thanks for the PM and a beautifully written update.do update the next part soon dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsome ..just love your long updatex ...plz updatex quick ...with a lot Roma tic asrshi
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Posted: 9 years ago
update the comment here

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4638828&PID=134671074&#p134671074
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Posted: 9 years ago
very well written amazing job
looking forward
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: matosarah

I have a very lovely evening planned for them...let's see if I can execute it too.



Can I be really honest... I am dreading the upcoming heart break for Khushi more then their union... just the way on the show, i was dreading Shyam-Khushi MU by Arnav, more then Arnav-Khushi flirting during PayAsh wedding track...😆

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