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khareshelley

@khareshelley

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

mysterious story..!!!

loved it.. eager to read more..!!!
my like button not working..!!!

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Marvellous start
Loved it
Well written
Plz continue soon
Thanks for the pm

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Maham Iqbal

@candyjan

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

wowww awesome superb concept...

cant wait for start

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ArshiAsya

@Alai123

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

The prologue itself is very interesting!!!

Can't wait for the story to begin!!!

Continue soon!

Thanks for the pm😉

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gprs

@gprs

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Interesting prologue..mysterious too..

did really ratna die only because of the drink ??
is Khushi rebirth of Ratna?????noo..you mentioned only in Some cases the rebirth will occur..

Anyway I'm not the one to decide it..I'm impressed by it Shalini sis..waiting for the story..

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Intriguing prologue.. Khushi is born with mole in her left ear like ratna.. interesting.. poor Arnav feels sorry for the young boy who is blaming himself for his biggest loss.. loved the prologue.. looking forward to read this amazing story.. best wishes and happy writing Echoes From The Past 😃

thanks for pm 😊