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Rish_Rubles

@Rish_Rubles

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Bohot nakhre hogaye mere 🥱

Ab comment! This is a scary prologue, indirectly Arnav did kill his mom right? I am so sad for him.

And Khushi is born? Its too hard to guess how would they meet actually. You know you should write horror more, you seriously wrote this serious type stuff so good!!

Awesomish. waiting for part 1 🤗

I commented doesnt mean you are forgiven, wo toh bas mera dil bohottt bara hai!

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SirenMitra

@SirenMitra

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Very interesting start.. I'm so thrilled...

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Hina malik

@HinaMalik91

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Brilliant start!

I was so intrigued with the story that i didn't even realise when it finished and i want to read more for sure!

Best of Luck for this new story! I am sure its going to be amazinggg:)

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tuli_jayee

@tuli_jayee

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Sorry Shalu, for commenting late.

I have a feeling , that may be there is more than what meets eye. By that, I mean may be Arnav's mother didn't die by drinking that alchohol only. May be there is something more to it , unknown to little Arnav. May be there is something more to Arnav's father's death.

But whatever is it , I am onboard with you.

I am so tired of seeing the usual arrogant & rude Arnav falling in love with the innocent Khushi, & then the same rona dhona, redemption & what not. I am extremely excited to explore a completely different genre on Arshi. Bring it on dear.

Please promise me there would be scary scary , very scary moments, ghosts, chilled silence , lonely dark house, shadows, lots of suspense & thrill. I am excited already.