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Shalini

@TwisterGirl

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

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pravallika

@pravallika

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Posted: 9 years ago

Omggg!!! I just can't believe that I'm the first one shalu 🤗 😆

My first reaction to this is, i turned my head seeing the banner.. sorry dear but it is scary..

Prologue is intriguing and very different. .. I've never read anything like this before. .. this is going to be the first story of reincarnation I'm reading. ..

So, ratna is kushi in this birth... interesting dear...

Mystery part i love but hope you don't make it scary one 😳

Waiting eagerly shalu

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@_CrystalFlames_

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Wonderful start Shalu...
This story has started itself from the mystery...
Arnav's father fight with each other and later his mother died...
While Arnav blamed himself for the same...
But it's not really his fault because he just thought to make his father happy in his childishness...
Not knowing what those pills were for...
Okay so Arnav's mother has this mole which symbolises good luck...
And now Khushi too has one and that too at same place...
What's the relation B/w the duo...
Waiting for next update...
Update soon... 😊

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Lumos_Solem

@Lumos_Solem

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

that was one hell of a start girl. i was going shit shit shit from the moment little arnav got fascinated by those pills. damn it, poor little boy 😭 i can't imagine the kind of guilt he's going to live in for the rest of his life.

and what's with the mole? arnav's mother too had it. don't tell me khushi is rebirth of ratna. 😕

great start. 👍🏼

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

awesome start...very interesting...👏

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-BeYourSelf-

@-BeYourSelf-

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

Very nc nd intrstng concept.. Dffrnt one.. Love it

plz continue soon..

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Nimie207

@Nimie207

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

If through this birth Ratna could bring more love to Arnav,it is more than welcome...Shalini, a new venture u are staring soon and must say it is gripping...looking forward for our journey to kick start soon...Hope our Khushi brings Khushi to our Raizada...