Originally posted by: Kiddo_Star
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Oh my darling sissy! Pardon me but I'll unres it once I am back from my coaching
~*~UN-RES~*~
Oops!!! I am really very very very sorry for this late un-resing. I'm sure you'll forgive ne, karoge na?
Chapter-12 (A)
Wow! Just a simple WOW!!! Kya update tha didu!
The past!!! 19 November...
A significant date where everything started from. Knowing that day's event was one of the most awaited thing in the whole story and now knowing it, it just took my breath away! The cruelty of a beast over the innocent beauty made my breath hitch. The thing I loved about it was Khushi did show her guts. Though she ended up getting physically abused as always, she did stand up for herself at least once not Fearing abt his demonish reaction to it.
Her pain, her anguish, her desperation, her need for freedom... Everything... Everything was so genuinely and wonderfully depicted through this update by an awesome writer like u. The anger that had bubbled up in Ryan seeing his so-called fiance stand up against him and speak herself out had been successfully able to draw his character in my mind as a reader.
What took away my attention was... Khushi was trapped in the hotel room... Then how the hell did she reach the Cruise Deck. That had taken all my attention and I just wanted to keep reading and reading and reading.
21 November,
The night of which had witnessed a brutal abusing of an innocent and helpless soul by a merciless, insecure and jealous demon. Very eagerly had started to read this part wanting to know what exactly had happened behind those 4 closed wooden doors that had taken away every ounce of life the innocent lady held up in here. The brutality at its peek...
Again something caught all my attention. "How did she come up the cruise?"
"You will know soon Ryan. You will know soon..."
When was that SOON? That was all I could think of.
Chapter-12 (B)
Ahh!!! The most awaited chapter... The one that finally answers all the questions as it reveals the truth which no one could have ever imagined. Arnav was so eager to know what was written further. He did feel Khushi's pain through the journal written. It was so real. When I felt so affected by it then Arnav loves Khushi, he would have been so hurt and broken. He would have been seething in anger for Ryan hurting his Khushi.
23 November,
Seriously? That was the same day everything happened. The death of the evil, the evil finally loses.. The journal entry of that day was something unexpected. And even in the last chapter you did keep up the suspense didu *pout* Aap jaisa koi ho hi nahi sakta yaar. Aap great ho.. Hats off... Salute you... Bow down... U R THE BEST!!!
The biggest journal entry ever. Wow! Each and every event was described in it. How did Khushi write it? Was all I could think. After all she was too broken and scared with Ryan's death. Okay, fine she wasn't broken but yaa she was scared at least. And yes, Khushi raised the correct question...
Why would she leave her journal with Arnav when she herself said that she can't do without her journal and that she always needs it?
The way u had created the utter importance of this mere secret holding journal was appreciable didu. 👏 I really don't have words to say anything anymore.
Adriana!! The time wrap!! Two time wraps!!! Getting entangled in it!!! WOW! but does this time wrap really exist? Is there any time wrap in the waters of Ireland? Is it for real? Is there really Adriana? Gosh! Even after the story ended I have so so sooo many questions. Pls answer them yaar. I'd love to know that.
So here I end my longest every comment on any story ever...
*sigh* How could I even write such a long comment? Did I write a mini update or a complete update of mine?
Can't help didu! You'll have to take the efforts of reading my craziness filled crap
But one thing is always going to remain true and that is...
I LOVE YOU!!! MAUHHH!!!! *tightest hug ever and sooo many kisses*
Love,
Yours,
Munchkin
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