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Kamala

@Kamala05

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Posted: 9 years ago

#671

This is really a unique , amazing work . I am awestruck reading the last part.😊

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

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Posted: 9 years ago

#672

Originally posted by: Kamala05
This is really a unique , amazing work . I am awestruck reading the last part.😊

Thank you so much!😳

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SUCHISMITA

@Suchi_ASR

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Posted: 9 years ago

#673

yo simiii

tick tick again!!! 😃

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1029751

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Posted: 9 years ago

#674

Waittt!!!! Am I the first one? AM I REALLY THE FIRST ONE??? Yipppeee!!!!! Wooohhhooo!!!!🤣

Didu was this an epilogue? U should continue this... C'mon yaar I wanna know more... I wanna know their trip.on Cruise Adriana... THE REAL SEA VOYAGE OF KHUSHI IN CRUISE ADRIANA.

I am, to be honest, speechless! U always manage to surprise me and today u just left me speechless with this piece of work.

4 years! 4 years passed since 23 November and still it feels as if I haven't missed a day in these 4 years.

U have described all the days starting from Arnav's desperation and restlessness to him running to the Hiltone Palace. From him lying to Khushi for her betterment to him starting a new phase of life with HER.

Kehte haina,

Jis jhooth se kisika ghar basta hai,

Woh jhooth jhooth nahi hota!!!

Los Angeles.. One of my dream places! Khushi's fears were well described. It wasn't a cliche where KHUSHI just woke up from the hospital bed and welcomed ARNAV in her life with open arms as her lover. But this did depict the realism of how Khushi felt, how she needed time, how she felt abt Shaisha's death, how she tried giving tribute her baby sister, how she chose a new friend in life, her new confidant, her new supporter, her new and the first and the last ever love.

I have said it before and I am saying it now I AM GOING TO MISS THIS STORY OF YOURS DIDU!!!!

You are amazing

Aria would have been sooo cute with traits inherited both from her mother and father.

I'll miss it.. *sniff*

I LOVE YOU DIDU!!! MUAHHH!!! *tight hugs & kisses*

Love,

Yours,

Munchkin

Edited by Kiddo_Star - 9 years ago

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gprs

@gprs

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#675

Hey..I read from7to last part ..sorry..I couldn't stop myself from reading it...that was really. .I don't know what to say..amazing buddy..I never imagined something like this...amazing..

the last part was really good..in part A I felt confused..I thought khushi might have some powers which worked only after seeing Arnav ..something like that..but that was awesome..

part B..really gave me all the answers..seriously where did you get such ideas and theories..is The story about Adriana true or your own creation? ?..

in earlier updates Ryan brutality really made me anger even on khushi too..but in the scene arnav consoling khushi I really appreciate her for standing herself though she committed a murder..
I loved it how she stopped him from killing that beast by saying those words..even in the condition she did think about him..

well done buddy..loved it..and i liked it that in the end she gave the chance to decide his future..great work dear!!
Salute you!!

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

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Posted: 9 years ago

#676

Originally posted by: gprs
Hey..I read from7to last part ..sorry..I couldn't stop myself from reading it...that was really. .I don't know what to say..amazing buddy..I never imagined something like this...amazing..

the last part was really good..in part A I felt confused..I thought khushi might have some powers which worked only after seeing Arnav ..something like that..but that was awesome..

part B..really gave me all the answers..seriously where did you get such ideas and theories..is The story about Adriana true or your own creation? ?..

in earlier updates Ryan brutality really made me anger even on khushi too..but in the scene arnav consoling khushi I really appreciate her for standing herself though she committed a murder..
I loved it how she stopped him from killing that beast by saying those words..even in the condition she did think about him..

well done buddy..loved it..and i liked it that in the end she gave the chance to decide his future..great work dear!!
Salute you!!

Thank you so much hon! ❤️

Well, Adriana is very much from my own creation. But I do believe a lot in folklore and stuff, and sea mysteries are something that have always intrigued me!

Glad u liked the story!

Keep smiling 😳

Edited by Simi1711 - 9 years ago

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lechuarshi

@lechuarshi

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#677

res

epilogue is here

unres

much awaited epilogue..i felt lyk crying..(happy tears😆😆)...Happily married and enjoying their parenthood...

He is a very practical man..but still inside him..he craved for some love..unconditional love..he just believe Adriana and made his choice...listen to his heart...

in time wrap..it took only 2 days for them to fall in love

but in real life..about 6+months..koyi baath nahi...she need tym to adjust all the sudden changes in her life...Ryan and Garima went missing...😆..

then her friendship with arnav😳😳..then finally love, understanding, trust and then Marriage..

their little bundle of joy Aria...he named her after Adriana as a respect...after all she is the one whom helped him to find his true soulmate...

1st Bday of Aria in Cruise Adriana...😳

thanxs for this thriller ride..

Edited by lechuarshi - 9 years ago

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

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Posted: 9 years ago

#678

A brilliant story which has a repeat value. I suggest you publish this story. It is damn good.. and this will be your ticket to fame...Superb story, impeccable writing. Fabulous execution.

Take a bow lady, you have created a masterpiece that needs to be read by one and all.

have already recommended to a bunch of my friends😆

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#679

Originally posted by: Junglebee
A brilliant story which has a repeat value. I suggest you publish this story. It is damn good.. and this will be your ticket to fame...Superb story, impeccable writing. Fabulous execution.
Take a bow lady, you have created a masterpiece that needs to be read by one and all.
have already recommended to a bunch of my friends😆

Tysm for the kind words lovely! 🤗

I'm elated the story could strike a chord with majority, despite not being the conventional romance! 😊