Arshi SS :I Perfectly Flawed I Pg 83 IMP Note *Complete*

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mhd72

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Posted: 9 years ago

#341

I am so in love with this strong Khushi!! You have managed describing their relationship in just one sentence; Khushi might have loved the Arnav in him, but it was ASR who had fallen for her!!

This one line takes me to so many instances where, like most of us, I had questioned his split personality when dealing with our butterfly. 😊

Akash's complex character, his internalized hurt has come out in the open. I wonder, what the 'mother' in Manorama is going to feel and say to pacify him.

Absolutely amazing.

Continue soon & thanks for the pm.

Much love,

Mili.

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tashi26

@tashi26

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Posted: 9 years ago

#342

awesome update...i felt bad for both arnav and khushi...its not easy for arnav to let go of ASR within him after all the hardships he has faced...and Khushi deserves to be treated with love and care...

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sweetydoll32

@sweetydoll32

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Posted: 9 years ago

#343

Awesome update dear please update soon

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APARNA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#344

famazing update

finally manaroma was showh mirror by akash.ASR has a long way to go to reedem himself and bring his khushi back

thnx 4 pm

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kshubhangi

@kshubhangi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#345

Always ASR . I can't believe Arnav is so twisted. He needs a shrink only then he can get Khushi back. He is going to screw up more

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silvercloud1980

@silvercloud1980

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Posted: 9 years ago

#346

I love how you write emotional stories very well. U bring out the emotions and feelings of each character with great detail.

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-BeYourSelf-

@-BeYourSelf-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#347

Brilliant part

Loved it awsmly written

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sunitikapoor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#348

A fabulous update...what a twist...Akash is not Manorama's son. Glad to see Arnav back with his confident ASR persona.

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Alannah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#349

Just came across your story!! u have done an amazing work, loved every bit of your writing!! please pm me when u update next!!

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 9 years ago

#350

Hello. Read the update. You have updated after such a long time that I have lost track of the story :-)

That is probably why the part didn't make much sense to me :-) other than Akaash's bit. I am glad he finally managed to yell at his mother!

Will try and read it again from the start to figure what the story was all about. Well I do remember that Arnav behaved really badly with Khushi and even threatened her with multiple things but she still walked out but beyond that could understand the conversation between Khushi and Arnav 😊 After all that he is done why is she still talking about going back to him?