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Alicia2012

@Alicia2012

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Posted: 9 years ago

#361

Wow great story please update soon

I can not wait for the next part of your story and i feel so sorry for khushi and Akash. My name is Alicia pm me please

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Sarah

@ifsaal044

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Posted: 9 years ago

#362

I just found this story. Excellent writing. This one line from Arnav said everything. "Baby, we are from different worlds and there are some places where we can never meet."

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lara3110

@lara3110

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Posted: 9 years ago

#363

Awesome writing. Waiting eagerky for the next chapter. I thought that Khushi would be pregnant by now. Think about it.

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mhd72

@mhd72

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Posted: 9 years ago

#364

You seem to be MIA for quite some time now.

Eagerly waiting for your updates.😃

❤️

Mili.

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shubhanjli

@shubhanjli

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#365

Awesome story. Loved it.

All characters have their own Shade. Nobody is perfect. Beautifully discripted.

Please update next soon.

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#366

Hey dearies of PF, there were some issues but now... after feeling blessed and invigorated by a few loving reader's words so I will be back.

And will update ASAP.

So don't you worry...

I'll be back.

Really soon.

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#367

Originally posted by: ranogill
Awesome ... I loved the way you present this most flawed ASR/Arnav .. And this not perfect Akaash Singh raizada..and not so saintly Anjuli jha/raizada..and this not so meek Payal raizada .. And this strong Khushi raizada

Thank you so so so much! I am really glad that you liked the newer perspective!

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
brilliant update...

Thanks!

Originally posted by: shafqee80
Zabardast update ..and what a twist ...akash is not mamis son ...but brothr of arnav ...???

Thank you so much! You got it perfectly!

Originally posted by: nandrajogdivya
awesome superb best thanks

Thanks!

Originally posted by: crazyweird
Awesome update you surprise every time

Thank you dear!

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#368

Originally posted by: john-angad
He still hasn't learnt anything has he

Akash is adopted...when did i miss that? !?

A man never changes in a day. Akash is not only adopted, but the step brother of ASR. Yeah... that's the twist.

Originally posted by: Junglebee
simply amazing
loved it

Thanks!

Originally posted by: asha_mehta
Very interesting
Akash is not Manorama son...shocking twist.
It's nice to see khushi standing up for herself.
Continue soon

Thank you so much! Also that Akash is ASR's step bro!

Originally posted by: shils28
Superb update! 👏

Thanks!

Originally posted by: cj-the-fool
a fabulous update...just what i needed after that tumultuous last chapter...great to see Arnav back with his confident ASR persona...hopefully he will utilise it properly..in a good way...things have not yet become irredeemable...but this is his last chance. i am keeping my fingers crossed

Thank you so much love! ASR will always switch in and out of Arnav, they'll never separate.

See ASR has brains, I'll just make him use it. 😃😆

Originally posted by: bloodyeyes
Your are a flawless writer . Just loved the way you present it . Loved this arnav khushi

Thank you so much dearie!

Originally posted by: Arshika_arshi
I am little confused ...😕
but the writing was good!!!!

Basically Mami couldn't bear a child and Akash is Arvind (Arnav's dad)'s illegitimate son. To keep the heir of the family intact, Akash was taken into the family and mama mami took Akash as their own kid :)

Originally posted by: cj-the-fool
aww u replied to my comment..u r seriously a sweetheart...i really enjoyed the new chapter..i am feeling hopeful after reading it. One thing i noticed in arnav, he never tried to include khushi in his own circles...not wanting khushi to feel uncomfortable or forcing khushi to change is one thing...but if arnav tried to help khushi to groom herself, to modify herself a bit for her own betterment would have made khushi more secure...she would have had a better placement in his life...she would have felt she belonged...
aww, thank you so much for taking the time to write such a beautiful comment! that's true, arnav loved khushi but he walked ahead in his life w/o holding her hand and that's the trouble.

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#369

Originally posted by: abivicky86
loved the update

Thanks!

Originally posted by: 0913155
Speechless aweome amazing update loveddd it tooo good can't wait for next update plz con soon thanks for pm😛

Thank you dear!

Originally posted by: sasir
Brilliant..
But this arnav/ASR is beyond my understanding...
Hope he redeem himself soon...

Thanks dear, don't worry, he wasn't a man born to be understood.

Originally posted by: aanchu19
awesome!
Finally, Akash spoke his heart out to his mother. I badly wanted him to take a stand for his family and you made him do it. Thank you very much for this, really.
So Arnav and Khushi talked over phone not face to face...I feel you are showing only Arnav at mistake, even Khushi is at mistake too. She does silly things many times which no normal person could take easily. So what if she is shown as innocent or kiddish? If ASR is bad then this silly Khushi is also irritating.

I am so glad you loved the Akash part, really. I never said Khushi wouldn't be held accountable. But then, not now... maybe later. :) But both are at fault, isn't that what the title suggests? 😉

Originally posted by: Happytwinkle
Marvellous update
Loved it
Well written
Plz continue soon
Thanks for the pm

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
very sad update
I hope every character find peace soon.

Soon, very soon!

Originally posted by: shiv456
Awesome

Thanks dear!

Originally posted by: Arilip
Hey nice story...

Thanks!

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#370

Originally posted by: roopathomas
This story is from a totally different perspective... N I love it..

Thanks!

Originally posted by: rosalineak
Amazing...

thanks

Originally posted by: tashi26
awesome update...i felt bad for both arnav and khushi...its not easy for arnav to let go of ASR within him after all the hardships he has faced...and Khushi deserves to be treated with love and care...

that's true, thank you so much!

Originally posted by: sweetydoll32
Awesome update dear please update soon

thanks

Originally posted by: kkrnightriders
famazing update
finally manaroma was showh mirror by akash.ASR has a long way to go to reedem himself and bring his khushi back
thnx 4 pm

Yay! Thank you so muchhh