Arshi SS :I Perfectly Flawed I Pg 83 IMP Note *Complete*

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Syeda Buraira

@cj-the-fool

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Posted: 9 years ago

#331

a fabulous update...just what i needed after that tumultuous last chapter...great to see Arnav back with his confident ASR persona...hopefully he will utilise it properly..in a good way...things have not yet become irredeemable...but this is his last chance. i am keeping my fingers crossed

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sonali mehla

@dhakad_chori

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Posted: 9 years ago

#332

Your are a flawless writer . Just loved the way you present it . Loved this arnav khushi

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Rimi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#333

I am little confused ...😕

but the writing was good!!!!

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Syeda Buraira

@cj-the-fool

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Posted: 9 years ago

#334

aww u replied to my comment..u r seriously a sweetheart...i really enjoyed the new chapter..i am feeling hopeful after reading it. One thing i noticed in arnav, he never tried to include khushi in his own circles...not wanting khushi to feel uncomfortable or forcing khushi to change is one thing...but if arnav tried to help khushi to groom herself, to modify herself a bit for her own betterment would have made khushi more secure...she would have had a better placement in his life...she would have felt she belonged...

Originally posted by: IArmageddonI

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0913155

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Posted: 9 years ago

#335

Speechless aweome amazing update loveddd it tooo good can't wait for next update plz con soon thanks for pm😛

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sasir

@sasir

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Posted: 9 years ago

#336

Brilliant..
But this arnav/ASR is beyond my understanding...
Hope he redeem himself soon...

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Aanchal

@aanchu19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#337

awesome!

Finally, Akash spoke his heart out to his mother. I badly wanted him to take a stand for his family and you made him do it. Thank you very much for this, really.

So Arnav and Khushi talked over phone not face to face...I feel you are showing only Arnav at mistake, even Khushi is at mistake too. She does silly things many times which no normal person could take easily. So what if she is shown as innocent or kiddish? If ASR is bad then this silly Khushi is also irritating.