#5 Arhi FF : Limerence [ Completed ]

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canapoem

@canapoem

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: kushikumari

Mints,

A very happy shankranti to you! May the year bring you the very, very best.

Your Maya got me. And i am putting my thoughts down...

Dreams are alright, without them one would hardly be able to achieve success. But is it necessary to let dreams take over our lives?

i think maya was lucky to have been married to a friend. is it possible to be miserable being married to a friend, who especially took such good care of her? was her dream of being swept off her feet by a stranger so important that she couldn't let the idea of being swept off her feet by a friend seep in? How difficult is it to accept the friend and make a good life with him?

the dream is so important that the life of a seven year old, and a friend doesn't matter? I find it appalling that she thinks she "sacrificed" a mother's love by not taking arnav with her. when in reality, she should have sacrificed her dream for her child.

I find it unacceptable that one can bring a child into the world and NOT be responsible. It is an act of selfishness that surpasses anything else. Sure there are exceptions based on circumstances, but this is one that has no excuses.

-kk

Well said my dear friend.

How selfish of her to abandon a good friend who loves her immensely and a small child for whom his parents are everything.

How could she live with this kind of guilt all life long?

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

hmmm but when u get a child into the world u do coz u know what u are doing

u cant run away without concequences

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canapoem

@canapoem

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Mints, Happy Sankranti to you too my dear.

What an intense update this was. You nailed it my dear friend.👏

I was wondering whether this is the first time you have brought in a character so controversial in your stories.

Maya- A very selfish woman.😡

What does she mean by a prince charming coming on a horse and sweeping her off her feet.

Which world did she live in? She could not love her dear friend who became her husband and who inturn loved her immensely. I remember Arnav's words from earlier updates where his father had named his business Maya Enterprises even after she left him.

What other prince charming was she looking for other than this man?

He did not abuse her in any way, loved her unconditionally, supported her. Does she even know half the women population in the world get abused by their husbands in one way or the other.

And over that she had a little child. A seven year old kid for crying out loud.

She left everyone and went away, just like that!!!

Atleast could she not have the decency to keep in touch with her own child.

Where was she when Arnav lost his father and everything at a young age of 12? Where was her motherly love when Arnav became an orphan and was adopted by his uncle and aunt?

I hope Arnav says , fine heard your story and lets say good bye for ever.

She does not deserve a place in Arnav's life now.

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finnie

@cute_monaya_fan

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#64

I loved the concluding lines of arnav...somehow i geel I'll support arnav in this...

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sweetieangel

@sweetie_angel

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Good one
Waiting to hear Arnav's side of story

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barsana

@barsana

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#66

congrats for the 5th thread

loved the update...

since we r nearing the end of this ff i hope u r working on another amazing story😉

thanks for pm

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Dhruvi Gupta

@Dhrenu

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Awesome update girl..:) i have no more words to praise you mints yaar.. :) The update starts from heart warming moment n ends with an emotional meet of arnav n his mother.. i dont find arnav's mum an sacrificing woman infact i felt she is one selfish woman who cares about herself.. i know each n every person have their choice in every matter of their lives but that doesnt mean that you can left your responsibilities unfulfilled.. how can a mother be so mean that she left her 8 years old son to live without mother's love.. a person who is her husband who cares for her.. an ideal husband.. !!

i hope arnav make some sensible decision further if there will be needed any!! you left us at cliffhanger mints.. plz update soon!! :) you are mind blowing as always dear:)

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arshisimple

@arshisimple

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Beautiful update Mint 👏..

Your stories always represent friendship, love, romance, family and ethical values and Limerence is not an exception!!!! The story flows with all these emotions without feeling forced or fake and that's the beauty of your writing 👏...

Beautiful beginning with very pure relationship between two friends. Love Payal's help, support and trust in Khushi. The moment you said that Manorama has called Khushi and Arnav alone and early, I knew it would be something to do with Maya !!You are closing all the loops and Arnav's past is still lingering on their future. So it's fair to clear last burden from the past to begin a new chapter with completely happy and content slate!!!!

Well I heard Maya's story but I still don't feel completely sympathize with her !!!Loveless marriage must be hard but when you bring child in it then it's hard to understand what Maya is trying to explain!!!! I didn't feel once that Arnav is being harsh or mean to Maya and would love to read how their conversation go from this point! !!!

Well couple of more chapters and we are done with a very beautiful Journey 😭 but once again I am so glad that I get to read this story mint 😊. Please don't worry about being little late, will wait for you and I think little longer wait makes it even more special to read 😛😉. Once again thank you for the PM!

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Wow .. This was amazing, Mints:)

Arnav and Khushi truly are perfect for each other!

Nice to know about Maya... My heart goes out to Arnav.. Waiting eagerly for his piece!

Happy Sankranti to you as well 😊

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#70

oh that was an intense chap... not sure if i understand maya... but what she did was not right... i mean she waited too long to ask for forgiveness...

eagerly waiting for the next!