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lovely ending .finally happiness for khushi..Mrs gupta still not feeling guilty about what she did..

Thank you for pm.😛

It was after ages that I was looking for a story on IF. And I feel lucky to find this jem of a story.

I love fairy tale romances and cindrella is my favorite. So reading an Arhi version of cindrella gave me immense pleasure.
I am in short of words to express my thoughts on the story.
Arnav and khushi both so different in nature yet so similar. Both had lonely childhood and so found solace in each other's company.
I was sure it was her payal which she had dropped. After all payal and Arhi have a deep connection :D
I loved the pace of the story. Slowly revealing things and giving proper importance to all the characters.
I abhor people like her step mother but it is saddening that such people do exist who think they can get their share of happiness by destroying other's. Good to see her in mental asylum.
It was nice to see that arnav doing small things to make her happy and not giving up on her even though she tried hard to.

Loved how payal never became like her mother and helped her sister in the time of need. Also liked it that Anjali and akash too helped them in every possible way.

Though it was amusing to know that khushi had never known his name even after spending many days in his company.

Loved where their wedding took place...that place was very special to them having had all the happy moments together :D

I can't tell you how glad I am that I stumbled upon this story today. Loved it completely. Thanks for posting this. :) a well written story :)

This story is fantastic, brilliantly written and very very beautiful ❤️ The cinderella of today and her prince charming didnt let us down at all. The portrayal of emotions and the amount of efforts you have put into this story is awesome!!

Loved the story, read it all in one go 👏
Brilliant 👏
Have sent you a buddy request, please pm me for any of your stories 😃

I hope you remember this poor, so heavily busy, irregular reader of yours?
Bad joke, right?
I am not poor because I got such a lovely writer as my friend, heavily busy? No..just a little busy. Irregular? well.. that is kind of true :P


Anyway, I received this PM titled 'Epilogue' and I was like 'Oh no, the story is over? How is that possible? Wasn't it just yesterday you started posting it?'

My point is that I haven't had enough of you yet. I NEED another story. Like..in a month.. okay?

That is the maximum time you get to start writing again because I know you already have lots of ideas you can pen down into a story.

About this one, I have told you many a times how uncharacteristically beautiful this story is.. each update was dipped in sweetness and beauty.

I really liked reading the last three chapters and the epilogue. Nothing could have been perfecter (more perfect?). :D


Arnav ji was too impatient to marry his Cinderella and make her his. <3

The witch mother finally got to sleep on the bed she had been making for herself the entire story.

Payal was really awesome when she helped Arnav with those original documents. It was very brave of her to do that. *claps*

And finally the wedding.

The happy ending.

Beautiful all the way!

You ended the story with as much perfection as you began it with.

Totally awesome.

Now I cannot wait to read more. Maybe an intense story full of gutter scenes in every update? Haha.. Kidding! :D

I just wanna read anything.. so come on.. write more..

Write MORE.

PS: In case you don't wanna write more I know where to find you and I have a pretty decent degree in pestering!

Don't make me use the talents I don't wanna use!

Thank you for this beautiful story

A perfect end to a wonderdul fairy tale.

Khushi got what she deserved amd with both her hands and her heart full. Arnav's love, his eagerness to make her his. His efforts to make sure khushi has the wedding she wanst and the life she dreamt of if ever with her rajkumar. He even stayed with her in lucknow after marriage shuffling between delhi and lucknow. Now why would not khushi mive for her husband dear and a family she always wanted but never had.

The mrs. Gupta got what she deserved and there is no doubt about it. She was and still selfish at its worst coz if she only wanted her daughters betterment than she already have it but her hate and jelousy of khushi is not understandable but hey i dont want to understand her. 😉

Anjali had some fun at armavs expense and we too. 😆

Thanks for the epilogue.

Most beautiful story loved it ..