Ek Jashn OS: OHANA | A/N updated | Page-01 | Dec 07 | - Page 11

Originally posted by: asmi_Sarun

Lim ..first and foremost I would say.in khushi style..NAHI BILKUL NAHI..this should not be your last attempt at intimacy.. U really don't know what tacky is.. Trust me I have read a lot..in the past three years.. This is by no means close to this word u used to describe ur attempt at writing intimate moments...dear dnt u dare call that again...

Ok now coming to the OS.. Yet again u left me speechless.. U r making me a sucker of ur stories..I just need to find tym for DYFL ...I m so excited already... And you know what I thot after reading this...that this should have been the jashn..but then I appreciate what is being done as a part of jashn..n m happy it happened ..in whichever manner ..at least it happened.. I understand its a epilogue in a monologue format..where u just get to see the narrator..and other are the guest appearances. I m accepting it and hence no complains..

Coming to ur stories. There r very few writers who connect me to the real arhi..trust me u r the new addition to that small list.. I just love u for loving arhi and writing on them..I know now m talking nonsense :) keep it coming dear.. Please..

Originally posted by: abivicky86

vow superb excellent how well you have written and just didn't want it to end how lucky we would have been if we could have seen it on screen .

Originally posted by: mints23

This was one passionate and dreamy OS Limon!! I feel like packing my bags and setting off to Hawai with my very own Arnavji... 😉 This story just shows the long way that Arnav and Khushi have come. They have changed subtly for each other... because of each other. Their love seems to have deepened with time and their understanding uncannily brilliant. I loved that fact how you have shown Arnav's guilt... because redemption was something I missed in the show and even this slight realization of his wrongdoings... Arnav wins brownie points from me! 😆 I loved this bold and beautiful version of Khushi who is not only a tigress in the normal life, but also in the intimacy they share. Its always nice to surprise your man... and seems like Arnav was surprised quite a few times. 😳 Stories that are close to IPK are always close to my heart and I loved this anniversary jashn. 🥳

Originally posted by: limoncello

Haha, Mints! Hawaii is so beautiful and dreamy!

Thanks for picking that up. I've watched the entire show on Hotstar...twice...in a row! And I'm starting the 3rd round tonight. 😆 After watching the episodes again and again, I'm appalled at how badly Khushi was treated...by everyone actually and most of all by Arnav! 😲

I think 3 years is too less to forget all the naainsaafi he has done to her, hai na? And like I always say, I like the angsty/angry ASR more than Arnav. So I cannot totally let him go, no matter how tender and romantic my story will be! 😃

And anyway, Barun was ASR...I think he was born to play ASR! Any good looking actor worth his salt could have been Arnav, but I don't think anyone else could have done justice to ASR! Ok, now I'm just blabbering like a pankhi!

So glad you liked it. Your approval means a lot to me...but you know that already, hai na Mints? 🤗

Hope you had a good night's sleep dreaming about the return of our beloved ASR, albeit for a few seconds.

Love,

Limon.

Originally posted by: mints23

Lolz... Your reply is longer than my comment!! 😆 Don't remind me of the nainsaafi! I so wanted a redemption of sorts in the show. It just got worse when initially Arnav ignored Khushi over Sheetal!! And I think the the starcast was absolutely spot-on... and I cannot imagine anyone else playing these characters. I guess I am just biased to this show and its actors... they were simply superb together with brilliant chemistry. See... I sound like a pankhi too! 😛

Eagerly waiting for tomorrow... when we get our dose of rabba ve's!! ❤️