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limoncello

@limoncello

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Posted: 9 years ago

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limoncello

@limoncello

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

Author's Note

OMG! This was insane! I wrote and wrote and wrote and I realized, I never want to end this. Anyway, this is the longest I've ever written without a break. And this is also the first time I'm attempting to write something intimate. 😳 If it reads tacky, please maaf kardo. Haha! You can tell, right? Almost all the kisses in this OS reads the same!! 😆 I don't think I will be attempting this again.

Please scroll down for the translation of the 2 letters. A big thanks to Ruchi (Arshi67) for editing my written Hindi. It was pretty pathetic before she came to my rescue. Thanks darling! You rock!! 🤗

Arnav's Mom's Letter

Hamare Chotey ke bahu ke naam
Waise yeh kangan khud hee pehnane wale hai

par aapko ek raaz ki baat batani hai, isliye likh rahen hai

Dhyan rakhiyega aur savdhan rahiyega

hamare Chotey ke naak par bahur sara ghussa rehta hai

aur dil main bahut saara pyar

Ghussa bardasht karna aur pyar sooth sameth lautana

(To my Chotey's bride,

I will anyway make you wear these bangles myself,

But I need to tell you a secret, and that's the reason I'm writing this

Pay attention and be aware, Our Chotey has a lot of anger on his nose

but he also has a lot of love in his heart

Take all his anger in and give him love, tenfold)

Khushi's letter - What Arnav said 3 days before the remarriage when he takes her to his Mom's garden for the first time.

Khushi,

yeh sab, yeh rasme, jo kuch bhi ham kar rahe hain

ek hone ke liye, yeh sab apni jagah hai

Lekin mere liye, aaj, tumhe yahan laane ka matlab hai

ke hum ek ho gaye

Tum aaj se meri patni ho

Meri Maa ki bahu

(Khushi,

Whatever we are doing, these rituals, to become one

they are all on one side. But for me, today, bringing you here

means we have become one.

You're my wife from today

My Mom's daughter-in-law)

Hope you enjoyed the OS. Thank you for all the likes and comments.

Love,

Limon.

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

+ 13

Ocean of Happiness

Posted: 9 years ago

Res for now :)

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Limon, I loved the idea of them celebrating the day Arnav took her to his mother's garden as their anniversary.

You've given such a delightfully playful and passionate glimpse of them. Showing how far they've come with each other, with traces of their old selves making an appearance. The deeper understanding each has of the other is very evident.

My favourite parts have to be the way you've written of the subtle changes in them as they're influenced by the other. In a very real and natural way, keeping in mind their intrinsic natures.

Their love is sach mae hamesha wala ... but an inclusive one ... ohana, a lovely word for what they are and for the values they hold.

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

Beautiful OS
Loved it
Well written
Thanks for the pm

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Lily30

@Lily30

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

Loved the os 👏
Thank you for the pm 😃

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Anu567

@Anu567

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

Limon,

This was mind blowing...just like Arnav and Khushi and you know what! 😳

This would have been the IPKKND Ek Jashn that all the fans wanted to see onscreen to begin with...however, it would obviously not have been the easiest thing to screen...your story makes for a magnificent replacement! Could just picture all of those things happening out there almost as if we were in Hawaii. Haha! Enjoyed it immensely...reflected all of the original elements we love about the show and the most incredible bits of Jashn too. Thank you for the music...for the poetry and lyrics...the quotes and humor...all too blissful. Take a bow, girl. I loved the Khushi Kumari Gupta version 2.0 of your story too much...and the Arnav as well! Unbelievable! 🤗

Hugs!