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limoncello

@limoncello

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: esha85
The story sums up how most of IPK fans see the future of Arnav and Khushi...Loved it completely

Originally posted by: varsha2KD
This was such a beautiful OS 👏

Originally posted by: sweetie_angel
awesome one

Thanks 😃

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limoncello

@limoncello

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: albmum14
Perhaps ek jashn purpose was not only to serve as promotion for hotstar, but mainly to fire the imagination of our writers. To remind us of the power and prowess of your imaginations, the best moments from the original show and your spins on how you see Khushi and Arnav after 3 years. For these I am grateful.
When this imagination is combined with heartfelt writing, a desire to bring justice to those traits, quirks and moments that made us love ASR/Arnav and Khushi, then the result is an OS that satisfies the mind and assures the heart that all is well with our couple.

First I want to say how I enjoyed this bold and confident Khushi. For once a piece that shows how she grows in her husband's love. She is an equal to him and that is worth mentioning.

The description of the places just makes me sigh that I am no there.

His efforts at making good while being her beloved Laad Governer, is so endearing to see. A husband in love trying to repair his past actions, trying to cherish his wife and do the best for her.

May I know the secret of her empowerment...

Thank you, my dear! 🤗

I am beginning to eagerly look forward to your comments. 😳 It warms my heart and makes me write more! So, thank you, for that! 😊

Yes, Ek Jashn did bring a lot of the good writers back from their hiding. And I for one, am enjoying all their stories immensely. I'm humbled you think I'm one of them.

I've always hated how Khushi was treated and how she was shown as being incapable of change! Not her innate Khushi-ness, but some refinement in her character that would have been a treat to watch. Ek Jashn took that to a whole other level that somehow seemed like a tad too much! Khushi and Arnav, in my mind, should change for each other, get attuned to each other, in a more mundane, day-to-day husband-wife way! I hope I did justice to this thought process.

Haha! I think the secret to her empowerment has been and will always be Arnav's love! His acceptance of her the way she is! Familiarity in the bedroom will definitely help, of course! 😳

Love,

Limon.

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limoncello

@limoncello

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: sukanksha
Beautiful
Awesome
A master piece

Aww! Thank you, darling! I'm glad you're finding some time to read my stories and liking them. 🤗

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Anna Thomas

@Annasabu

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#114

Sweet OS

Just like two sides of a coin dwells love and hate, hamesha saath saath.
You cannot sift them out entirely.

Love
Anna👏

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zeetvhits

@zeetvhits

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#115

Whoa! How did I miss this one??

Limon, you are one hell of a writer! Your writing is so refreshing. It's light, airy and simple...just like a french macaron! 😃 It doesn't overwhelm you with grand descriptions (which, I frankly find very boring, even from the best of writers) and overtly flair-y language. It flows with an ease that only few can achieve! Bravo! 👏

Coming to the OS, it's brilliant!!! I loved this new side of Khushi. It's actually a natural progression for her, I think, given how chirpy she was on the show. I loved the quotes, the pictures of the villa in Hawaii and of course the title!! OHANA! Beautiful!

Write more, my dear!

Loads of love,

SS.

Edited by zeetvhits - 9 years ago

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limoncello

@limoncello

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: Annasabu
Sweet OS

Just like two sides of a coin dwells love and hate, hamesha saath saath.
You cannot sift them out entirely.

Love
Anna👏

Originally posted by: Arshi.Sugi.IPK
Awesome os loved it

Thank you 😊

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limoncello

@limoncello

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: zeetvhits
Whoa! How did I miss this one??
Limon, you are one hell of a writer! Your writing is so refreshing. It's light, airy and simple...just like a french macaron! 😃 It doesn't overwhelm you with grand descriptions (which, I frankly find very boring, even from the best of writers) and overtly flair-y language. It flows with an ease that only few can achieve! Bravo! 👏

Coming to the OS, it's brilliant!!! I loved this new side of Khushi. It's actually a natural progression for her, I think, given how chirpy she was on the show. I loved the quotes, the pictures of the villa in Hawaii and of course the title!! OHANA! Beautiful!

Write more, my dear!

Loads of love,
SS.

Aww! Aren't you a darling! Where have you been SS??? Long, long, long time! You have been MIA for longer than I have! And lol! Isn't it time to change your username? 😆

Haha! You still remember! those macarons will be the death of me someday. And thanks for the compliment. 😳 You rock! Will talk more over PM?

Love you,

Limon.