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bumblebee7777

@bumblebee7777

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#81

ohh this was so sweet and so beautifully written. khushi trying to blend in and learn about new things such as wine is as much a treat to read as arnav giving in to khushi's antics.
I think your way of letting arnav know she was pregnant was the cutest.
Are you writing a piece for the 'expressions of love' blog ??? 😳

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just4this

@just4this

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Wow,
It was dream like.
Beautifully written
All the quotes added 4 chand to the story.
Loved it to the core.
Thank u for this fairy tale.

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priya

@inlovewithtvk

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

beautiful os..
the most beautiful part of the os was the quotes u used.. they were brilliant nd perfect for the os..
loved it thanx for pm dear it means alot..

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PagliTitli

@PagliTitli

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#84

First thing I thought of when I read the title was the Lilo and Stich quote in Lilo's voice 😆 Glad to see that made an appearance and loved how you wove it in along with all the other quotes!

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Nimbus_211

@Nimbus_211

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#85

That was beautifully written!!!
It was indeed a jashn!!!
Arnav and Khushi did come along way to reach where they are..

Arnav, Khushi and their Ohana...hamesha,for eternity and evermore.
:)

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limoncello

@limoncello

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: akai
Wonderful dear.
.you have written everything in a single os.
It's really amazing..

Originally posted by: Pdrover
Just awesome
Very well written
Thanks for pm

Thank you 😃

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limoncello

@limoncello

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: sarita_barun
This was so beautiful, almost felt like crying.
Loved the quotes in between the scenes... A fab job!
I loved Lilo & Stitch while growing up, very fond memories

Aww! Thanks Sarita. You're a darling for always liking my work and taking the time to comment. Definitely motivates me to write more and write better! 🤗

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limoncello

@limoncello

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: bumblebee7777
ohh this was so sweet and so beautifully written. khushi trying to blend in and learn about new things such as wine is as much a treat to read as arnav giving in to khushi's antics.
I think your way of letting arnav know she was pregnant was the cutest.
Are you writing a piece for the 'expressions of love' blog ??? 😳

Aww thanks Bee! 😳 I wanted to write something on Ek Jashn, but I hadn't planned the OS. I'm a write as you go kinda writer and I'm glad it turned out this way! The response has been the best I've gotten so far for my work. It is both humbling and overwhelming.

No, I'm not! This is my very own expression of love...both my love for IPKKND and Khushi-Arnav and their love for each other!

I am planning to write a couple more after Khushi's entry. I will PM you if that's ok.

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limoncello

@limoncello

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: just4this
Wow,
It was dream like.
Beautifully written
All the quotes added 4 chand to the story.
Loved it to the core.
Thank u for this fairy tale.

Originally posted by: inlovewithtvk
beautiful os..
the most beautiful part of the os was the quotes u used.. they were brilliant nd perfect for the os..
loved it thanx for pm dear it means alot..

I'm glad you liked my story and the quotes. Thanks for commenting. I might write a couple more Ek Jashn OSes. Check back on my Index in a week if you're interested. (Link in my siggy)

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bumblebee7777

@bumblebee7777

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#90

I have no idea how to reply to your reply but..yup yup yup...PM me when you write more on Ek Jashn.

And you write well Limon Di. Am planning on raiding through your index this week. 😳 😃 😃
get ready for tons of likes and comments on your previous work..!! 😊 😊

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