ArHi OS: It Started With A Miss

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sk2405

@sk2405

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

I should have read this much earlier. My bad!

Their almost kiss on Diwali was obviously the start of their almost kisses and I so loved the way you used that very concept to write this beautiful OS. This complete thing reminded me of the golden IPK days. Their families were often hindrances in their RV moments and there was a time I used to wonder if the kiss will ever happen. I loved the way you started with portraying their hatred, her confession followed by the cold shoulder, his realization of love, to him finally voicing out his feelings; I loved it all.

This was a beautiful Diwali read (post-Diwali for me) and I want more. 😃

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Nameera

@Nmyra

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

RIDZ!

OMG! I haven't read an ARHI OS from you in ages!! I was laughing so hard throughout the whole thing! Also, Arnav's voice when he said, 'f**king Finally' - had a distinctly Liya-ish tint to it.

😆

They say the launch of the New IPKKND Episode is on the 30th - how about an OS for every day till then? *puppyeyes*

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Ridz thank you so much for this wonderful Diwali gift.
What a beautiful take on the series of misses which started from a Diwali!! I totally loved it.
The pain Khushi would have felt at not only his rejection but his cruel words that she didn't mean anything to him was so well expressed. She was not hiding behind her smile anymore, her pain was very well felt followed by Arnav's realization. He tried to escape his feelings but couldn't and well the number of times they were interrupted..😆
Truly loved it...

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Srijanee

@luvflicksgirl

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Aaah the classic Arnav Khushi... The ultimate IPKKNDness😆

I felt like i had gone back to our IPKKND days

👏

Wonderful OS

Thanks for the PM

Luv
Srij😳

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awroneema

@awroneema

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

hello jii...i just came accross the othe OS of yoyrs... TOUCH ...and its almost like it... or should i say no miss version... luvd that as well..

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Miss #1

My favorite, and it would have been so different if they had actually kissed that night. The sparks, the sexual tension and the oozing chemistry that night.. Sigh! Missing IPK so damn much.

Miss #2

The store room scene it is. But, you used the after almost kiss scenes and collaberated with this part. Nice move 😉

He wanted to tell her through his actions rather than spewing nonsense, alas the knock.. Wrong timing!!!

Miss #3

Wowza, that was totally unexpected. I love this take, and he confessed during Payal-Akash wedding days. The actual time when he felt he was slowly falling for her.

Again, kabab mein haddi, NK!!!! Dang it!

Miss #4

Aww, putting aside his beliefs he agreed to marry her. That was so adorable.. *cries*

Seriously very cute. Loved how Khushi was constantly reminding him that he does not have to do it for the sake of it. But, he wanted to do it, for the sake of her and his heart. *dreamy eyes*

Buaji... Grr!

Miss #5

This was the funniest. I loved ASR's dialogue and Anjali's retort. Super cool 😆

Yay, they are getting engaged. 😳

Kiss #1

Khushi is too funny.. she wanted her first kiss on her wedding night before anyone interrupts. Such a hard love story they had with nosy family who always annoys lol.

Ahh. Arnav's going to fulfill all her wishes...

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This was such a treat to read. I read it twice and I am still grinning. Thank you for writing this and sorry for being late with my comment.

Keep writing.

Love

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NikitaM11

@NikitaM11

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Oh my god, that was amazing... It didn't go in the direction I thought it would at all, I absolutely loved this! Haven't been feeling that connected to IPKKND lately, but man this brought back all of the feels.

Please write more of these!! I can't tell you how great this OS was