ArHi OS: It Started With A Miss

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aaliya dev raichand

@rarshiaaliyak

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

wow...

superb...

yes it all started on diwali night ...

and didn't stop...

very beautifully written...

loved it

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Bibliobibulus

@Bibliobibulus

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

That was great.. Really nice buildup to the final kiss.. By the end of it, I felt ready to scream, lock the effing door, turn off the bloody phone! Can't believe I only just came across this story..

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

I'm terribly late...humka maaf kar do😳

Ahh...the misses...judging by our frustration, we could only imagine what Arnav could've gone through😆

I liked that while there were events from IPK, you kept the negativity at bay (this coming from a Shyam champion😛...well was solely responsible for perking my interest before Rabba ve's became frequent in the show)

And good of Khushi to have taken the initiative...there can be no interruption when a woman decides to do something😉

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Aakanksha

@ina_saahil

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

It was the cutest and sweetest OS I have ever come across. It was so sweet and I simply loved it.
And the misses that u showed after the first one were damn innovative and each one better than the previous.
And finally in the wedding night Arnav and Khushi had their first kiss without any miss!!! 😉
I absolutely adore ur work. Do keep writing..

Lots Of Love.. 😊 😊

Edited by ina_saahil - 9 years ago

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dprover

@dprover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

loved it

i don't know how i missed this OS

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PhoenixKhushi

@PhoenixKhushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Oh, this was soo awesome..

I'm speechless...

Loved the way you described each scene, Arnav's frustration, the anticipation, Khushi's shy yet eager response to him...

And I really love the fact that instead of writing it as an entire story, you just took one topic (of the kiss) and told their whole journey from Diwali to shaadi in one go.. And so beautifully..

And those scenes were so well written that I felt like I had watched an entire film in one go...

A really great os...

❤️

Where can I read more??

Edited by PhoenixKhushi - 9 years ago

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gprs

@gprs

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#67

nice os buddy..I like your writing

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shalbi

@shalbi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#68

it was so very beautiful.. Their almost kisses and their frustration for not getting the one thing they have tried so many times and being interupted in between ..

loved it

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dair10arshi

@dair10arshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Uh oh...Guess I'm too late. This cute os is removed... All the comments are piercing my heart! Is there any place I can read it? Please please please!!

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