Khushi's plight was penned down exceptionally! As expected she went in to her world of guilt and wasn't letting anyone to console her. No matter how many times you hear you're not wrong, guilt is something you cant get over since conscience is something nobody has control over... Same thing happened to Khushi I guess. I Loved the way you have narrated the conversation between Khushi and Arnav, a girl who always lived a lonely life was seeking solace from someone else, that shows how vulnerable she was feeling and the amount of guilt she was carrying her made her seek assurance from Arnav that people are not accusing her... That was a very touching scene. Amidst all we have been getting snippets of Arnav's past, seems like Aman played a pivotal role in making the great ASR that he is today.
Anjali reminiscing about a young Arnav trying to make their granny smile was so adorable. And in present also he is doing the same thing; being the keeper for people in his life, Khushi is indeed in safe hands since Arnav will never ever let anything happen to her. Anjalis's words about her brother were filled with so much of love and warmth, the bond they share is so strong... Finally Arnav and Khushi trying to be normal people, it was very sweet! And I totally love the way you convert something as trivial as holding hands in to something so poignant! Arnav trying dancing just to make Khushi happy was very sweet and now it seems like Arnav's turn to let out his past... From now on its a journey of both healing each other I suppose... I hope Akash can get over his guilt and talk to his sister; they badly need each other in their lives... And finally it seems like senior Raizada will do something about her caretaker's hidden passion J seriously you're one amazingly talented writer! Thats all I gotta say after reading the last two chapters J Before I end my long ass comment I would like to say I really liked the below words uttered by the Raizada siblings; I don't know I felt these words conveyed triumph after a huge storm (must be sounding stupid!)
"You know that ticket was non-refundable, this is going away from your salary."
"In your face, Alzheimer's!"
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