ArHi OS: Reconstructing Life*Removed*

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Pinky.Raizada

@Pinky.Raizada

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Awesome OS, This had all the potential to become a SS. Thanks for the PM.

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Rish_Rubles

@Rish_Rubles

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Res

I have a long thing to comment but in the morning :)

Take care

Edited-

As expected, I had so many things to say at night and now i forgot

Anyway, I LOVED this OS ❤️Their first meet was very cute, she was scared of everyone around her, she thought of him to be some thief lol. And he was really stalking her, staring her actually. I love this Arnav, he is just so sweet.

I love you too, when we say that we have a very less amount of realistic writers on this forum, you are one of them. Both the character, actually all the characters are inspired by ordinary people around us. Be it NK, Khushi or Arnav.

NK did wrong, he should have acted human and at least be civil to his wife instead of having affair outside with La, he could have asked for time.

But it was so lovely that he never got his memory back, our Arnav got a chance to come closer to Khushi.

The emotional scene of Arnav's childhood. It really must have not hurt him now. It really brought tears to my eyes.

The scene of them spending a day in their hectic lives is loveee. Omg, haha he is so romantic and the overall dog scene was hilarious. He has a sad past yet he is such a positive feeling in the whole story. Aww!

And on the whole, this OS had everything in it, emotional scenes, funny scenes, reality check, everything! It is one of the best ones...I didnt find it messy or confusing, it was one of your best creations so far 😳

I hate you because you write so good, but I love you because you write so good. How do you do it?

Amazing!

Edited by Rishaal - 10 years ago

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Rami

@Rami92

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Thz s perfct

Moving on s not about hating its all about not bothering

Its just the correct way yu hu hav put out n wrds

N i must say am falling fr thz arnv more than our ruthless asr

Omg he s cute

N i felt bad fr khushi

But she deservd more n she gt more

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ArshiAsya

@Alai123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Awesome OS

Life is unpredictable we just have to accept it and move on

Thanks for pm😉

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jisa

@jisa

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

A very lovely and interesting writeup...!!!
loved the way portrayed khushi's anguish and desperation...!!!
loved it.!!
but while reading it,... one thing struck me that... NK's POV would interesting..!!
I don't think of him as a core selfish character... but it would be nice to see his take on this matter...
or maybe...his thought after he remembers something about khushi...!

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MIT DEY

@mit0905

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Its mind blowing...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Arshi diwanee

@Panther007

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Dnt knw kya bolun me..😆

Ok so nk lost his memory nd forgot his love for khushi his marriage nd eveything..nd when khushi wanted him to remembered all things he even didnt try to do that..as if he was waiting for his memory loss so that he can marry lav😳

I think it happens for good..see the brighter side na..if he didnt loss his memory then how could khushi gonna b with arnav😆 who although not make her feel like princess bt make her feel spl with small small things nd able to mend her shattred life nd reconstruct it with bricks of immense love 😳

Loved it👏👏

Edited by latersbaby. - 10 years ago

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Sarah

@ifsaal044

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

I want this story to go on, even thogh you said OS

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suji5

@suji5

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Nk didn't have parents?
whatever he done is wrong
lost memory means not leave everything there and start new
good that khushi got Arnav

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Awesome. . Loved the concept..

Life is full of surprising.. We have no idea what turn it will take... Just like khushi. . When she thought her life is perfect but it turned upside down and when she was miserable and lost, a hope came in the form of Arnav.. He gave her a new life and a new reason to live..

Loved it..