ArHi OS: Reconstructing Life*Removed* - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
He has truly reconstructed her
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Nice
But pls continue with next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Cheeni! Very beautiful story.It left me with a big smile at the end.
I thought Arnav is Khushi's psychiatrist which turned out to be Akash.
I so loved Dr Arnav Singh Raizada.I didn't mind NK's Amnesia as it led Khushi to ASR.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for all lovely comments! I am glad you guys liked the OS:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cheeni this is how I felt when I read this OS irrespective of your POV note.

NK was a dream guy, with chocolate and roses, and weekend candle light dinners. She was every thing Khushi might have thought of having in her man. But than reality strikes and when the charming face of a dream man washed away there was a ruthless heartless man who didn't care a damn about anyone but his own happiness.

I agree that what happened with NK was unfortunate, that he lost his memory but than he didn't try making space for khushinin her new life where as he must have put effort to learn about business which he started after marrying Khushi. So yeah, he was a selfish guy, and frankly his repentance would have only hurt Khushi. Coz now the question arises that even though he remembers who Khushi is will he leave Lavanya and there daughter to come to Khushi.

As for Khushi is concern, she was living a dream life with NK because when it broke it took away her temporary sanity. I'm happy she realized this is not who she is and went to her dad, happy that she decided to move on and see destiny gave her another chance in the name if Arnav.

Arnav to me looks like a normal guy. One who wants to eat, and in that he can forget chauvinism. Who is there to lend you his shoulder, listen to you when you want someone but not go overboard with understanding or faking his emotions. He is the goofy one who will fight over his fav sitcom and even remote, he would bring pets home and try to make his wife convince to keep them by bribing breakfast in bed or may be much more 😉 .

So yeah, for a change Khushi moved on to live a normal life by easily falling for a guy like Arnav. Coz his such acts can make her laugh whereas Nk's perfectionism only brought a smile on her lips.

So for me, glad you didnt show NK repenting or asking khushi's forgiveness.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Such a beautiful story, girl. So plausible when you think of it...and agree with your author's note in the end...making NK repent would have been completely off tangent...the point is I suppose, that one can only ever count on living in the present. Poor Khushi...it was a punishing experience, but certainly one that taughthereverything about moving on...finding someone like Arnav was of course the perfect panacea. If not, moving on could take that much longer...if it happened at all.

Best,
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh man ! Wonderful OS ❤️!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I agree with about moving on ... But question is even with memory lost people do try to remember their past... Nk here just rejected khushi compleatly... No wonder khushi took so much time to recover..I am just happy that arnav persisted with her and they are happy now ...but there is niggle in mind what if Nk remember every thing let's say in two years time, will he leave lavanya's and find some one else because he won't get khushi as she is really moved on this time
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Woww u write logical concepts...loved it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
CC,

This was really really really adorable.

I see my husband in Arnav, the total nut-crack. He is absurd I tell you and well yeah a perfect match for my eccentricities haha.

Love is not about roses, balloons and candle-light dinners. Love is love and its not perfect.

I serioulsy adored this story and waiting for more such amazing lovely stories from you.

Muahs.

I love you

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