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Posted: 10 years ago
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So so so Sorry for being this late editing it. My comment should've been the first one as it is directly dedicated to me. 😆
But what can I do? My mom is hell bent on making me good at cooking(like seriously? 🤣) so no time for even myself. But as promised it is Sunday and here I'm.

First of all I want a classy "Joota" for this classy writer. Who the hell told you its hopeless? You bewakoof insaan! It's just beautiful. Every story has its own taste so does it. It is different from our usual romantic stories but believe me that is the best thing about it. So don't you ever say that it's not good or something of that sort.

As a writer you are not feeling good as you had to write a note for your readers but its not your fault. Believe me Basanti I understood the whole OS without even reading your note. Isn't it enough?

For me the highlight of this OS was Arnav. Every girl needs some positivity in her life and if the positivity is this handsome phr to bas... 🤣

Khushi's character has its own beauty. She isn't perfect like most of the time Khushi in our stories is. She has her own fears and past. She was ditched not directly but still! Forgetting your love and most importantly your husband isn't easy. The way she reacted was so apt. I don't have any thing to say about NK or his wife. For me the OS is about Arshi and most of my comment will only be about these two.

She got hold of herself at last. Picking the pieces of your broken heart is never easy. But she did it. I know life won't be like before but still she fought with her own self. Hats off to her. I just love your strong Khushi. In every story of yours. She never gives up so easily.

Aw the entry of Dr Raizada was just hmmm... Kya bolu!

The way he brought her back to life... The way he made her fall in love again leaving behind her past and everything related to her past life was just so damn beautiful. The path of success hasn't been easy for him too but he hasn't made it a problem. He is happy with his life and now he has transferred this quality in Khushi.

Her last note was the most beautiful part of the os. I just loved it with all my heart. You are an exceptional writer and I love you. Remember that hamesha <3

Love you. See you in Memories thread. Then in Chaos. Bohat kaam Baki hai mera you see :D

TC
~~Aimmy~~
Edited by ..Aimmy... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Had nk really lost his memory or was he faking it?
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Originally posted by: piaviviandsena

Had nk really lost his memory or was he faking it?


No he wasn't
Thanks😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Even after khushi showed him So many proof of dere marriage he wasn't ready to accept her.
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Poor khushi. Y always women's have to suffer.?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Continue wid second part. I want to c nk regreating.
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@piaviviandsena:
hey sweetie thank you so much for such a wonderful comment. I understand your frustration. I have mentioned it that NK had no problem accepting that Khushi was her wife but he had problem loving her because he did not know her, he was suffering from Amnesia.

Why woman suffer always? It happened because of the accident, it could have happened to Khushi too, Khushi losing her memory. I made her suffer, I apologize for that. Last day my roommate had had a minor accident, she was riding a bike and she had a collision with a guy who was also on bike (bicycle), she suffered few scratches and he walked without a single cut. I wouldn't ask why woman suffered here? I hope we are on same page now :)

Second part, I am not sure about it, this OS was to show how a person can fall in love again, how a shattered life can be rebuilt!

Thank you so much for your lovely comment. I apologize again for disappointing you but I had no intention to make a female suffer here. Arnav suffered too, like she had explained. About NK, he was never a focus of the OS

Love you <3🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey cheese...
Such an adorable OS...again I wish every human suffering out there has a special 'arnav' made just for them...to fix, to reconstruct, without strings attached, unconditionally...every human good or bad deserves their own guardian angel

Thanks so much

Sri
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Cheeni,
This was totally amazing. I loved it.❤️
It was really unfortunate that NK did not remember Khushi at all after the accident due to Amnesia. He became a totally new person and Khushi became a stranger and he could not fall in love with her again.
This is life. We cannot make anyone fall in love with us forcefully, hai na?
I understand Khushi's frustration. She lost her child and husband due to the accident.
And so it was difficult for her to accept the fact that someone who had loved her so much was happy with another girl and even had a baby, just because of a frigging accident.
Arnav, I loved this guy.😃 He had a certain positive vibe.
He reconstructed Khushi's life even with his flaws.😃
This OS made my day 😃 I am still grinning reading the end.😆

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