ArHi OS:The Seven Vows|| *Removed*

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KBS

@oKBSo

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

You make everything so beautiful cheese!!!!

Even a nonbeliever will believe in Love and marriage after reading this wonderful OS

Thank you so much!!!

This was... awesome

I am spell bounded, awestruck

So simple, soothing... loved it

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Srijanee

@luvflicksgirl

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Waaaooowww dii

u r such a wonderful writer <3👏

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

awesome
beautiful is
u wrote the concept of imposed marriage very beautifully
the journey of arranged married arshi was fabulously written
loved it

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zebali

@zebali

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

It was prestigious os d.
Very amazingly written.
They bond was awesome.
Their love is greatest to.
Love,faith,passion everything was the best.
They confessed their feelings for each other.
She first confessed that give him courage.
He took too courage and confessed.
Happy couple Arshi.
Happy writing d.
Tfs.

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ragvir92

@ragvir92

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Oh dear You are an absolutely fantastic write dear

And As for as I remember this is your forte

You write this genre of os so beautifully

I mean wow That was absolutely amazing

What a beautiful scenes for each vows

The way Khushi lost for Arnav was just so so so cute

And you made everything so beautiful

Even in the last part you made the plans flop but the reasons by khsuhi is outstanding

Kudos to you yaar for writing this wonderful story👏

Please write more os and TS then.

Hoping to get loads of stories in your holidays😉

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Thank You everyone for reading and leaving wonderful feedback! Will reply to all the comments as soon as possible :)

Thanks again!

Edited by cheesemad - 10 years ago

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Edited by dumas - 10 years ago

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greshu

@greshu

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

A ver sweet update n khushi hind is took the marks, continue soon...

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Titaliya1234

@Titaliya1234

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

This one was rocking! Loved every bit of it! U presented a scene for each vow and that was mndblwng! Falling in love after marriage was perfect for arshi! Arnav must be glad about payal running away from marriage! Thanks for pm cheeni!

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#50

That was so sweet. . And the you have showed their journey of falling in love through 7 vows is just brilliant. .

Khushi is adorable and Arnav a perfect husband.. ❤️