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Posted: 10 years ago

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Thank you so much for reading this OS. Many of you asked me about FF or SS, I am sorry I cannot write any long story right now because my college is going to start in august again and I do not want to leave my story without completing it! But I might write some more One/Two shots!

Thanks for wonderful response on Paper Hearts, I could not ask for more! Love you all!!

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aimmy

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Posted: 10 years ago

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An other from you! Yippeee!🥳

I was actually quite surprised when you PMed me this. I was about to ask you for an OS but look! I didn't have to say anything😃🤗 Thanks for this Basanti 😆👍🏼

Coming back to the OS! Indeed beautiful! I love your khushi in every story of yours! Thori pagal thori cute with a beautiful heart❤️ The way she always gives her relation outmost attention is something i love about her. Be it The Khushi of A lot like love, Paper hearts ,Music and lyrics or My favorite HID! Her morals and heart of Gold is something that is most special about her👍🏼 Well I can relate with your Khushi very well because I see you in every Khushi of yours. You are also thori pagal Bohat cute! A fighter! Jhansi ki rani you see but with a heart of Gold!🤗

Lovely banner wese❤️

I just loved the concept. These days it is hard to find people like Arnav and Khushi who can sacrifice their lives for their families. They both realized what would be best to do to save their families from humiliation. And I'm glad it was their marriage!

I like the way they talked to each other and eased the tension between them. Clearing things is always good. Silence always worsen the situation. Elephant in room😆 This cracked me up! Only you can come up with something like this at such a critical situation😆 She knew about Payal and her affair and I'm glad she told him this.

Well I won't blame Payal for what she did. She was in love and it is the famous saying of our Own Raizada that Love can make anyone do anything. But her way of taking things in her hands wasn't right! she could talk to her family! No one but a family can understand you the most!

Then the way he assured her that she can study further... Awww Prince charming

That sugar free kheer line🤣

Bua ji😡 I can very well understand now why Pyal wasn't able to tell her anything about her relationship with someone. Only one word for Bua Ji.. Pathetic.

She was blaming Khushi! Gosh! But not to fear when we have Our Own Raizada here😉

Bua ji wasn't less and we have his Dadi too!😆 Hyy he again saved his wife and stood by her side!

Dream guy!

I loved the way their relation was progressing.

Hume aap par pura bharosa tha ki aap hi jeetenge, (I knew you were going to win!) Khushi said. They were returning to home, Arnav was driving the car when Khushi finally decided to say something, before that she was just blushing and smiling. Aur hume bohot achha laga, (And I felt so good) she smiled nervously.

What? Arnav asked. Apna jo kaha (What you said), she blushed again. Looking at her ruddy cheeks Arnav could not control himself as he leaned and kissed her cheeks.

Hey DeviMaiyya! She could only say that.

This car scene was just perfect. The cutest scene of the Os.👏

For me the highlight of the Os was that friendship vow scene. The comfort level was just beautiful and that funny tarka of yours was worth praising👍🏼👏

That silly competition and Khushi's blabber! Aww I was grinning like an idiot while reading that particular paragraph! You rocked basanti! seriously you rocked it all!👏

He wore a Kutta Payjama for his beloved wife😆 Khushi remarks on his new attire were just 🤣!

He realized that he has fallen for her! That too hard! His plans

But bechara Raizada! I was laughing reading when all of his plans failed one by one. But the outcome was most beautiful. Her confession was so damn beautiful! Her Arnav ji tried to do many things for her. Although he failed but the effort didn't remain hidden from her. I just fell in love with OS all over again while reading the beautiful conversation between Arshi!

So damn beautiful Basanti! Ye hath mujhe de de Thakur! Kya likhta hai ye!👏

Last but not least a standing ovation to our very own Raizada! Tu kaha se lati hai aisa mast maal? Apni factory ka adress mujhe bhi de please!

Beautifully written!

Already waiting for next!

Finger crossed😉

Love

~~Dhanno~~

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Ask me

@EchTee

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Posted: 10 years ago

Ah lovely os

Will edit more later

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Rish_Rubles

@Rish_Rubles

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Posted: 10 years ago

Mera bhi res😳

It was a jhakkaas and a superbbb OS <3

7 vows were fulfilled very nicely indeed

So Payal had run away here and due to this, Khushi had to marry Arnav

The scenes were really sweet and cute where Arnav standsup for Khushi and support her, he's ready to cope with her and make her understand how to defend herself and help her anywhere ☺️ Such a sweet hubby, aise log kahan milte hain aaj kal 😆

But it was such a sweet OS cheese, I loved it!

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

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Posted: 10 years ago

Updated!

Will send PMs later in the morning, EDT :D

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

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Posted: 10 years ago

JJ crabs

^Fried^

Oh god, how adorable was that?
CC, tune to shaadi ke vows pe PhD karli hai kasam se. It was really heartwarning to read each and every part along with those vows.

A brilliant job done.

Well, I've always said this, you are going to make a perfect wife... You are very understanding and I really enjoy reading your falling in love process after marriage.

This was one of the best. Cant wait for more from your pen.

Muahs

xoxo

Love
JJ

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